Maou Shoujo Makoto Chaos

by Meakashi

Original Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Harem Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural
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"It seems I was reincarnated as something that isn't human into a different world... something that drains my SAN points when I look into the mirror... and as the child of the demon lord no less. A demon lord who eats humans. And makes me eat humans, too.

This is a dream, right?

Well, I'll enjoy this craziness as long as it lasts. Maybe it'll make for a good story at school next morning. It's really a dream, right? Right?"


A normal, albeit tomboyish, Japanese high school girl is reincarnated as a monster made up of tentacles, in a world of sword and magic, and beings that drain one's sanity simply by existing. She is thrown out into the wilderness with the condition to return to the demon castle within three years, to have a claim to the throne.

But she does not really feel the urge to do so... or will her secret Chuunibyou heart beat faster at the prospect of becoming the next demon lord after all?

 


In regards to the tags, I know the "harem" one is frowned upon. But the protagonist is female and she's a lesbian, and she isn't magically loved by every girl that sees her while being an indecisive c-word. Give it a try, I'm sure you'll find this to be true.


Current Release Schedule: One to two chapters every week. Expect an announcement if I can't keep to that.

Standalone spin-off featuring SenkaRed Mantis and Avenger Doll

Cover art by Oracle125.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - I have no mouth, and I must eat ago
Chapter 2 - Saving Private Parts ago
Chapter 3 - Who Let the Wolves Out ago
Chapter 4 - I eat, therefore I am ago
Chapter 5 - Take Two ago
Chapter 6 - Legend of the Land Selkie ago
Chapter 7 - Normies Should Just Explode ago
Chapter 8 - After All, It's Only That ago
Chapter 9 - On the Road ago
Chapter 10 - Going for All Character Routes ago
Chapter 11 - Breaking Minds and Fourth Walls ago
Chapter 12 - Girls are Discussing ago
Chapter 13 - Side Quest Accepted ago
Chapter 14 - Saint of Luminosity ago
Chapter 15 - Slavery Doesn't Pay ago
Chapter 16 - The Raid and Redemption ago
Chapter 17 - A New Dawn ago
Chapter 18 - Pretty Old News ago
Chapter 19 - State of Emergency ago
Chapter 20 - The Path to the Capital ago
Chapter 21 - Through the Belly of the Beast ago
Chapter 22 - The Journey Continues ago
Chapter 23 - Row Row Row Your Boat ago
Chapter 24 - The Royal Academy ago
Chapter 25 - Like a Rat ago
Chapter 26 - School's Starting ago
Chapter 27 - Blazing Transfer Student ago
Chapter 28 - Angel and Demon ago
Chapter 29 - Pride and Prejudice ago
Chapter 30 - Cue Romantic Music ago
Chapter H1 - Dying Embers of Hope ago
Chapter 31 - Purity and Corruption ago
Chapter 32 - Every Story Needs One ago
Chapter 33 - End of Innocence ago
Chapter 34 - Spread Your Wings ago
Chapter 35 - Revealed or Safe? ago
Chapter R1 - The Lost Tombs ago
Chapter 36 - Demon Mages Association ago
Chapter 37 - Chaotic Revelations ago
Chapter 38 - The Conspiracy ago
Chapter 39 - Night at the Library ago
Chapter 40 - Not Like One in a Book Off ago
Chapter K1 - I Love Onee-sama ago
Chapter 41 - Detour with Benefits ago
Chapter 42 - The Demon Queen Pelomyx ago
Chapter 43 - Return to the Academy ago
Chapter 44 - School Days ago
Chapter 45 - Checkmate ago
Chapter A1 - Peace of Mind ago
Chapter A2 - Sanctity of Will ago
Chapter 46 - Cruelty in the Desert ago
Chapter S1 - Hyper-Dimensional Loli-Doll ago
Chapter 47 - Operation Desert Sweep ago
Chapter 48 - Slavery Does Pay ago
Chapter 49 - A Foreign Land ago
Chapter 50 - The Twin Goddesses ago
Chapter 51 - The Prisoner ago
Chapter 52 - The 6th Day ago
Chapter K2 - This Hand of Mine ago
Chapter 53 - The Red Tides ago
Chapter 54 - Battle for the Bulge ago
Chapter 55 - Time to Return ago
Chapter 56 - Ace Combat ago
Chapter 57 - Chaos Returns ago
Chapter 58 - No More Mercy ago
Chapter 59 - The Gravity of the Situation ago
Chapter O1 - Splinter Cells ago
Chapter O2 - Perfect Dark ago
Chapter R2 - Look at My Horse ago
Chapter K3 - The Nightmare Breeders ago
Chapter O3 - The Breaking of the Fellowship ago
Chapter 60 - Space Oddity ago
Chapter 61 - Revelation of Divine Divinity ago
Chapter R3 - The Lioness' Den ago
Chapter O4 - I'm Flying ago
Chapter K4 - Smackdown ago
Chapter 62 - Soul of Gold ago
Chapter 63 - Beginning of the Training Arc ago
Chapter K5 - Difference in Power ago
Chapter O5 - How the Other Half Lives ago
Chapter O6 - Everyday Life With Monster Maids ago
Chapter K6 - Friendly Monster in Law ago
Chapter Y1 - Out of the Dark ago
Chapter Y2 - Into the Light ago
Chapter A3 - Gathering Clouds ago
Chapter A4 - Brewing Storm ago
Chapter A5 - Risk of Rain ago
Chapter 64 - Megasonic Chaos Warhead ago
Chapter A6 - Demon Holocaust ago
Chapter 65 - Lightning Before the Thunder ago
Chapter A7 - Castle Crashers ago
Chapter A8 - Of Gods and Demons ago
Chapter A9 - Mighty Clashes ago
Chapter A10 - Cradle to the Grave ago
Chapter 66 - To Dust ago
Chapter A11 - After the Chaos ago
Chapter 67 - Aloha? ago
Chapter 68 - Windwaker ago
Chapter 69 - It's Still a Sex Thing ago
Chapter 70 - A Real Faux Pas ago
Chapter 71 - Time for a Timeskip ago
Chapter 72 - Aoranam Village Defense ago
Chapter 73 - Prophecies are Bogus ago
Chapter 74 - Welcome to the Jungle ago
Chapter 75 - Wah! What are we going to do in the brush? ago
Chapter 76 - Bewitched City ago
Chapter 77 - Your Princess is in Another... ago
Chapter 78 - Sea Witch Rapania ago
Chapter 79 - Woman of Steel ago
Chapter L1 - Set Sail! ago
Chapter L2 - Chase at Sea ago
Chapter L3 - Here Be Sea Dragons ago
Chapter 80 - Tonight We Hunt ago
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hopolite15
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 This is a story about a chaos demon that is sent to the human continent. It has great grammer and is one of the funnier stories on royal road. It also has some 4th wall breaks and a creepy(in a funny way) possessed doll. All the side characters have personality and they stand out. Even a dark elf with a crab claw as a hand is an intresting character. Read this, you wont be dissapointed!

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Review of Maou Shoujo Makoto Chaos

Maou Shoujo Makoto Chaos
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Style
4

The style in which the story is written is quite enjoyable. While not my favourite personally, and while it sometimes requires the "right mood" in order to get into it, there is no doubt that the comedic style is a fun read to the majority of the story's audience. The downside of it is its rather niche focus on a somewhat target audience, which may further hinder it due to its already restricted playing field of the genre in which it wallows.
On the flip-side however, doubling down on its focus may in fact be its strength
instead, and furthermore the style's satisfactory execution leaves no doubt in my mind that even to people who might not be familiar with, or downright dislike the niche that the story puts focus on, will either enjoy the style of writing, or at worst, will not be impacted by it at all.
I have given the story a 4 in this category mainly out of personal taste,
though it likely deserves higher.


Story
3

The story is so far the category with which I have the most issues. Leaving aside my general distaste for anything not done extremely well in this particular genre
(which to begin with should have a rather diminished impact on this particular story due to its original execution, but more on that later), I have decided to first assess it without prejudice. However even then I have a number of small and even some large issues with it.
First, the main character's goal is vague at best. She seems to lack motivation for things in general (note, seems; this is something that ties in with a point I will make later on) and she can be hard to identify with.
Her main goal at the moment is returning to the demon lord's castle before the 3 years are up but... what happens after? In fact, she had already succeeded once so far. Does that not count? And what happens next, after her goal is reached?
She also doesn't seem very concerned with finding out about herself, her species, about the world she landed in,... she seems to find out about these things in a somewhat passive way, rather than actively searching for answers, which seems like it would be more in line with a story progression.
What I think is the source of all these listed issues and a number of others is, that we do not seem to be able to get a look at what's actually going on inside her head DESPITE the fact that the story is written in FIRST PERSON.
That is an alarming failure on the author's part, as it seems to me that due to the story being written in the style that it is (though also somewhat hindered by the style in this aspect), we should be able to have a much closer and more persistent look at Makoto's motivations, her plans, goals etc. To be fair, Makoto does often state or think what it is she wants to do and acts very clearly on it, but even then she still seems lackluster in this department, mosty jumping from one immediate goal to the next in the reader's eyes.

I would like to compare this story to my experience of Kono Subarashii Sekai ni Shukufuku Wo. Both are stories that put a unique twist on the alternate world fantasy and both surprised me at the start with their execution and smooth progression. Despite my distaste for the genre, both managed to provoke interest from me.
I won't go into details on what I noticed about KonoSuba after I read all the Light Novels that are out at this time, but for this story in particular, despite my honest wishes against it, my interest for it began to falter with certain chapters. I still find interesting unique takes on the genre in this story in recent chapters, and honestly there are more now in the very recent chapters than in the school arc chapters, but I am very much looking forward to a fresh take that will put a new spin on things in the coming chapters.


Grammar
4.5

There is not much to say here. Aside from the very very occasional misuse of a tense or a typo, the grammar is excelent and small mistakes can be forgiven. The reason I don't give it a flat 5 in this category is simply because I am a prick.


Characters
4

The characters so far have left a positive impression on me overall. I have some minor issues with how some of their development has gone, but honestly, that in itself is something to be praised and in the end often comes down to personal taste, story genre, their roles and other things that aren't necessarily a subject of objective rating. Therefore, what I can say about this category is mostly along the lines of what I personally enjoy or do not enjoy.

I enjoy twisted anti-hero characters, I enjoy unexpected crazy twists, I enjoy a resourceful protagonist that isn't just a power fantasy.
I'd first like to say that Makoto does well in the twisted anti-hero department, does fairly well in the unexpected twist department (although I'd like to see more of those in the general storyline AND IN OTHER CHARACTERS!) and passes with flying colours in the resourcefulness department, albeit having some minor issues with the power department. That is not to say that she is too strong physically, she runs into her own set of troubles and does not simply go unchallenged, as shown particularly well in the latest chapter (ch58 - No More Mercy). I do have issues with her mental, psychological fortitude however, as far as young Japanese high-schoolers are concerned. While there is a lot I could say on this, I'll just say that some of it ties in with our seeming inability to see inside her head.

As far as what I don't enjoy is concerned... one thing that comes to mind is her overly passive and predictable sidecharacters (Senka in particular is somewhat forgettable, I had forgotten she was even part of the gang until I was all but done with the character review) While they have had character development, as far as I can tell it has mostly been towards them being more dependant on Makoto.

On the other hand, Makoto seems like she could be doing perfectly fine even if they had never existed, aside from her emotional attachment to them. I am looking forward to a lot more surprising developments on their parts, perhaps even a new groupie in the form of the golden lady in the recent chapter? I suppose we'll see soon enough.

That said however, I must reiterate that a lot of the characters so far have managed
to do a great job at charting out their personality and interests (all the more sad that this seems to be an issue with the main character). This is particularly praiseworthy as far as minor characters that are likely to not have a recurring appearance go, as a lot of them so far have made an impression on me.


Overall:
4/5

It is with a shaky hand that I give this story this score. That is not to say that it doesn't deserve it, or a better score. I believe that objectively speaking it deserves at least that, if not better.
The reason I rate it this way is in my personal enjoyment factor. While I do enjoy it, and look forward to new chapters and developments (mostly new characters right now), I felt like I had to give it this score more because it deserves better. While I do think that there are a some things it could objectively be doing better, I feel it would be unfair of me to not recognise the things it does well despite the fact that it's not my preferred genre. However, since it hasn't quite managed to completely reignite the same spark I had when reading some of the earlier chapters, this is my compromise between the two opposite sides. I'll be patiently waiting for the fire to be linked once more.

Escribo
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It's a very fun story. 

Style-Informal, lacks dialogue tags but makes it clear who's talking when. I found it easy to read, easy to empathize with the MC's internal dialogue and that kept me invested in her character.

Grammar-Found no errors.

Story-It's one of those type of stories where if you are concerned more about the goal than the journey I don't think you'll allow yourself to enjoy it.

Character-Based heavily in anime troupes and I think the author uses them well. Usually find that authors tend to not represent the troupes well so when you have the anime you imagined in your mind and compare that to the story, the story falls short. With this story I felt I could imagine the character's well in anime form.

Overall- Didn't expect much going in and found myself drawn in, as if a tentacle wrapped around my ankle and pulled me into a dark abyss.

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I found this story to be a very fun read.

Style: I like the style actually, but it's not really the best type of style. The 4th wall breaking gets a bit much.

Story: I very much enjoy the story itself. Being on the side of "evil" and reading from that perspective is really fun.

Grammar: I remember seeing some out of place grammar so 4/5.

Character: The MC is hilarious and her harem is also pretty fun. I enjoyed all of their shenanigans.

 

Lawes12
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I didn't i Start reading this Before... and Why you should.

This story was worth every second. The name kinda threw me off for a while as well as the cover art. But once you start reading the story it makes a lot more sense. the story really takes you in and there no terrible grammer mistakes that will drive you away. Definite must read!

Minaku
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After reading it for so long, I really enjoy how the story played out. Personally I enjoy the cliches and shoutouts to obscure references, it really tickles my funny bone. Hopefully the story continues on its current path for epicness and comedy!

syderitic
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Embrace the humor, sex, magic, world that make up this story

Very well executed idea, simply delicious funny moments in all their glory.

This is a very good story with an amazing schedule and great quality. I fail to see how this isn't more highly rated.
If you're wondering "should I read this?" read it. You won't regret it.

Thank you author for an amazing journey :D

Merly23@
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It made me laugh and I love it

I really had a good time reading it, it's funny, it's a new concept, at least for me, and Ii highly recommends it. To the author I have to say that its the best and I expect great things from him. Also Sorry but I can't decide about the grammar, I don't know it very good. However I think that it's good, I didn't have any problem reading it, so five stars.

Ambjoorn
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I basically never rate anything

But this time I'm willing to make an exception.

This story captured me and I felt compelled to read through it all at once.
I lost a few nights' sleep reading this, nothing serious.

You don't need any knowledge about Lovecraftian lore if you want to read this, however, the MC's species, Crawling Chaos, is incidentally a reference to it, so it might increase reader satisfaction if you at least know about Nyarlathotep.

Oh! And the references! Wonderfully done! I hope to see more of them!

Blue_rain
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The best character descriptions

This is a great story with the best character descriptions you can imagine. It has great grammar and is one of the best on this site. Read it, you will have a lot of fun with it. You won't be able to stop. 
I'm sure this story will reach the weekly top again, it's only a question of time. 
 
The story goes in unexpected directions,  but it is guaranteed to keep you fascinated.