Dragonfall: Enchantment

 Harry Potter is taught magic at school to become a Wizard. Sebastian is guided by Owdel in magic to become a Mage. That is all that is common between the two. J.K. Rowling and Oddmar are two different authors with different styles. I liked Rowling's style and I also like Oddmar's style. It is interesting. Writing about the story would give it away. Let the reader enjoy it. 

  I really like this book. It is about halfway written, probably not even that, but I would easily pay 60 dollars for it if this ever got finished.

 It is very similar to The Eragon books, but without the incredibly long wind up. The story is structured well so far, and the characters are believable, if not relatable. The only grammatical errors I have noticed are possessives, so basically none for something not gone over by a professional editor.

 I hope I have gotten your expectations up for dragons, as the author will most definitely satisfy your need for giant magical lizards.

P.S. This review is not responsible for any false expectations of flying, fire breathing, monsters that you have fostered after reading it.

Great start to the story! MC isn't annoying and the romance is believable. The MC's "cheat" isn't really too op and has its limitations right now, definitely potential to be so if the author wants to though

I just got done with chapter 17 and so far so good

So far the story is well worth the time to read even though the main character have a few flaws.  I will not go into details and ruin the story for you

I just finished reading the first book through amazon kindle unlimited and it was a great story.  Sorry I missed this one when it was on the road but thankfully I noticed the update message with it being available on amazon.  If you enjoyed the story here or on amazon don't forget to leave a review there so the author gets noticed.  It's great to see an author from here make it on amazon.  To the author, thank you for the book it was a very enjoyable single sitting read and I can't wait for the next book.

I'll just sum my review up by saying that this could be posted on Amazon or anywhere else where people actually have standards and still get 5-star ratings.

The story is well paced, nicely thought out and original. The characters, while somewhat cliché-y all have well fleshed out characteristics and personalities, and are consistent in their interactions with the world around them.

I have yet to find a serious grammatical error and the spelling is also pretty flawless. The story and the general plot are well thought out and flow nicely, with the writing style being pleasant and easy to read.

Note that this review is pertaining to the rewrite and is posted as of chapter 14. I also kind of went overboard with my description of the greatness of this story, don't get too arrogant, my lor... author.

One of the best books on RRL and it is definitely going on my reading and recommended list. 

 Ah yes, another wish fulfilment fantasy.  Little strugle or chalanges for our mc who quickly becomes quite powerful though borring at the same time....

Potentia, pretty solid writing, but things move too quick and mc doesn't really sweat for his acomplishments so they feel borring.   

I'm too busy to write a full review right now, but needless to say this is a fantastic story that has the beginnings of an amazing adventure.

great story, give it a read. allow for a slow start. writer is great at writing funny interludes \