Insect Dungeon vs The World. (On Hiatus!)
by Underload
- Graphic Violence
- Profanity
He woke up scared and lonely, but an angel came to save him from the darkness.
She told him it was okay, and he believed her. But before they could enjoy their lives a little, bad things started happening one after another.
Murderers, maniacs and leachers started attacking him for their pride, grief and some for simple fun.
He protected himself from the dangers and she guided him on the path.
They passed days like this for some time, but then those stupid humans released the ancient evil, and the target they choose... It was him.
Yes, this is a rewrite. But please save yourself the trouble of reading the original, this is miles apart form that and better. Though it is your choice.
Schedule: Three/Four chapters a week.
Days: Monday, Wednesday, Thursday, Saturday.
Chapter length: 3500-5000 words per chapter.
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Decent, but too early to decide if great.
I particularly enjoy what I'm reading, but at the moment the main character seems flat. I want to see actual character development from the main characters, as of chapter 14 an archer is more well developed from a singular line of dialog, he has motivation. But I have high hopes for the future.
Good story, the premise is interesting, the pacing is decent, but it have too many POV which ruined the story for me.
yes from me
it's a good story
in a way, I miss the low-level adventure interactions
but I kinda like it like this to where we start at the mid levels
note to all authors Grammarly can be a savior and its free
Couldn't Make It
This story needs heavy editing. Maybe I'm not used to how RRL is, but the conversations were distracting because of their rigidity and awkwardness. Additionally, the grammar is absolutely awful. I recommend that the writer uses some editing software such as Grammarly to fix the majority of these mistakes. I couldn't get into the story because these errors easily broke immersion.
Good story
This is a good story with a decent speed and storyline however I have to disagree with the previous reviews. I know that my grammar is not supper but if I had to compare this stories grammar with the other stories on royal road I would give it a 7.5. I have seen a lot worse (this does not mean that I am not of the opinion that something like grammarly is probably not a good idea, I do not have experience with the software so I can not say whether or not it will work as advertised). I hope the author will continue his story.
Good Story so far...
I like very much dungeon stories.
The autor has started very well in my opinion.
Read to chapter 14.
The relation of Rock and Minnie ... i don't know... i would wait a bit more to get so much close, trust is something that needs time.
About time it isn't clare how much time between the events has past. How much time for the aventurers get to the dungeon. How much for the ant's eggs to hatch?
About the insect thing... i like it very much. The power up not so much.... I thing that and insect dungeon should focus in great numbers to overhelm the oponents. Like the guild master said "Thousands or millions"... Maybe is very early... but a i think that the power of the intruders is scalating very fast...
Even with these minnor flaws i like very much this story and i will keep reading.