Scum of Humanity and his Youth
by Nogami
Hiraoka Hiroshi is a cynical highschool student who refuse to change. To him,changing is the same as admitting defeat to society's defected system. But when he turns in an essay that shows this exact same view, he is then forced to start a club with a person of simillar traits, a kind of club that helps other troubled children such as theirselves to deal with their problems. How will Hiroshi deal with this dilema?
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Edit : 16/05/18 : A good story in the making
Edit : 16/05/2018
I am now up to date with this story and I am happy to see that you have begun to differentiate your character and story from oregairu.
Your dialogue and main male character are well writen and interesting.
I must say that I'm more reserved with your female characters which are still ambiguously : heavily inspired from oregairu, cliche and original. I hope you will improve particularly with the last one you had introduced which make me cringed in many occasions.
In conclusion, the style is quite good, the story is interesting for now and i enjoy the banter beteween characters. But, i hope you will continue to improve your characters (females one in particular)
I hope you will pursue this fiction ^^ and i assured everyone that this story is worth your time. Even more if you originally liked oregairu.