Crazy Blacksmith
by GoatDragon
There was once a man who was called crazy by the ones nearest to him. But that man doesn't care, he just wants to play the new game Dragon Tale the way he wants.
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- Ratings :
- 5
- Pages :
- 15
| Chapter Name | Release Date |
|---|---|
| Prologue - The Beginning | ago |
| Chapter 1 | ago |
| Chapter 2 | ago |
| Chapter 3 ( longer chapter) | ago |
| Chapter 4 - innovation | ago |
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longer chapters please
if you can lenghten the chapters with (0maybe) more descriptions of characters and areas it will fill out better
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Too short and feels very random
It feels more like a cheap diary written by a lazy person. I don't feel any depth to it at all. And the chapters feel waaaay too short to be worth reading. You can squeeze all 3 that's out and that would be half decent in size.
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Well like others said 3 of your chapter could go as one and the reader doesnt get involved in this story because every time he would get involved you just skip hours of process to get the result which if you want to write storys is very bad because they will not be good. Nonetheless is like the idea and it can get pretty creative