AI immortal god soul

by Immortal god soul

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Reincarnation Strategy Strong Lead Wuxia

Our MC the creater of the most advanced AI dies in the process of merging his body with the AI system but to his surprise wakes up to find himself reincarnated into a new world,a world of cultivation. Watch our MC grow with the help with the AI system and his innate ability the immortal god soul. 

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god beast
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has great potential, great so far. looking forward to more chapters. one of the things that need improving though is the character names, it's a little difficult to understand who you are speaking about as u mainly don't use names for the other characters, at least so far u haven't used names for other characters. but I understand this is your first time writing and I am sure all these minor mistakes will be gone soon as u write on. anyway, great start, i think this novel has a great future.

Koharu
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Loving all the story, the only issue is that there are issues when referring to characters and the lack of grammar kills it heavily.

Trying to understand characters with little to no naming added to them makes it hard to read and the lack of capitals with incorrect spelling makes it almost unbearable.

Despite this, feels like a fresh take on cultivation and I hope you will find a proofreader.

Rikasa
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Dunno if I should read past chapter 1 now or just wait for more to binge read. Great so far! 

You were right about some mistakes, but then again it's fine, I think it is better for you to just keep writing and not make too many corrections, you'll make better progress. You can just fix those if you are not planning to write any chapters.

How u doing
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can’t wait to read more chapters. I see a great future for this novel.

aracgnidus
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I really like the ia system, it make me remember of 'warlock of the magic world',

Hope you finish it.

TheGamingNerd
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 Ice buckets i need to rewrite my review ;-; oh well here it is ... The novel is okay read but the story is developing too fast in my opinion which leads to major flaws and such .Another flaw is that you write the MC name with small letters but everytime you write a name you need a Cap at the start E.G : george=Wrong George=Right ... Second mistake is that you made the MC name but you never gave him a surname or any characters in the story ... 3rd mistake is that your writing has many flaws and doesn't feel right. Maybe it's just me i just say this cause i want the author to learn and try to make his stories better after all a better story always make people more interested to reard ( maybe you can even develop your own way of writing which almost none of the books in this site have or on wattpad :P ) I'm rooting for this work to acquire a top 10 spot with other novels after all chinese styke novels are 10 times harder to write than a japanese style one  because chinese novels have their own kind of style and if you are interested to make this story even better than you need to read the humongous chinese mythology (it's pretty boring but could give you some inspiration how you wanna progress the story ) I'll keep following this story hopefully it comes to a happy end ..every end is just sad in my opinion

Heavenly Demon Asura
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Good so far has a lot of potential

Honestly this is a dream come true since I read stories with AI chips and wanted to read a story like this

It has a lot of potential and if it can get a good proof reader it can definitely be considered top level

Deuxz
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Before i even start to list anything, i'm just going to go ahead and say that this story is great for anybody who loves stupidly overpowered cultivation novels without caring about anything else.

Everything happens very fast, the MC is Cringy, Too Accepting, Not-Human Like(Aka doesnt freak out or get scared from almost being killed by a large beast). Whilst the story is very over-exaggerative making the entire thing very cringy to read.

The grammer, though i can say this person is definetly not a naitive english speaker, is still very bad. It's like he never learned even the basics of grammer which is kind of annoying.

The story makes the MC so smart that he gets over 15 PHD's in extremley advanced technological fields before reaching the age of 20, which no matter what you say is impossible. Even Dr. Strange only got 2 in the matter of 15 Years with Photographic memory, and those are both for medical studies, let alone the complex technological fields.

For now, thats all i'm going to and can say. I'll keep reading this story, though i'm not confident it's going to get better. Sorry if you're reading this Author, but a lot of things need to be fixed.

Nightangle
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love it and cant wate for more chapeters

the character is using his brain so that makes me love this even more

also will you be doing patrion?