The Lord of Time - By Wiz

by WizOFTime

Original Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy Male Lead Martial Arts Strong Lead Supernatural

The Nine Great Clans rule the four continents.

 

Ten thousand years ago, the Space and Time Clans were destroyed, their bloodline powers eliminated and destroyed, decried as evil, fallen clans that made deals with the creatures of the Void.

 

Cast out and replaced, the world fell into a period of turmoil, where monsters abounded and death plagued the continent.

 

Now, it is the present.

 

The only thing Laujack Draeli Lo’Henson can remember about his past is his rather wordy name. Raised in an orphanage in the Duchy of Snow, Jack lives in Snowbank City, and dreams of becoming a Hunter, a powerful warrior that hunts the powerful monsters that plague the Continent, a protector of humanity.

 

Come and read of a legend unfolding. The tale of the Lord of Time!

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NICK144952
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Wiz of time. I love you... for what you create.... for how you write and finally..... making master pieces that you leave on hiatus.... I really wish that the stories you made were written by someone else.... not because they are not good... but because of the lost potential ...... whole universes lost in their pages.... worlds of discriptions... of life and its struggles. I love you..... but I also hate you for not continuing  your masterpieces that you leave behind when you are gone we the  people will remember and praise the one who created those masterpieces  and you will never be forgotten even after your death. So please clear your mind..... sit down for an hour or two and think about and reread your stories and try to continue them. Thank you. 

Guy Normus
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Can't wait to get to the middle of this book - y'know, when it gets hiatus'd or dropped. Like every single other one of this fella's stories.

Nice revamp of the Patreon, by the way. Can't have people seeing that you had other projects that were being funded that suddenly got dropped, with the purchase option left open for weeks (months?) afterwards. Bad for business.

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As for the review, I'll say this:

The prose is passable, the grammar pretty good. Nothing remarkable, but definitely a notch above the average RRL story.

The premise is... debatable, in terms of originality. Does an alright job of balancing characterization and a power fantasy.

All this sounds fairly good, but the story is yet incomplete, so I'll leave the rating as dead-center average until (if) the story is finished - 2.5 stars. Minus an extra star for the author being indefensibly undependable and unaccountable to his patrons, of course. Can't subdue all my spite; I'm only human. I simply can't abide by thieves. 1.5 stars.

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I'm honestly surprised that RRL still lets this author post a link to their Patreon, given how transparent and generally pro-consumer the administration seems to be. It's just encouraging their traffic to have their money stolen.

 

 

crusaderbond
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I've always liked Wiz's work

I never said much besides a few words of encouragement the last few times Wiz has been here. 

 

I really enjoy all of his stories. The community is really toxic towards him though. 

 

It can be hard to go back to a place you've created after you've left it. You have to tear everything down and rebuild it. It's not the same story anymore. I get that. 

 

The mob of people screaming about the plot direction or the characters or whatever until wiz gets depressed and leaves are what frustrates me. One review of this says "buyer beware". For crying out loud. This is a story freely given. It's a labor of love. There's no buying involved. It's his project and I know if I were him, I wouldn't want to write with people like that hanging around and harassing me. 

 

Just enjoy the show. If it ends prematurely, you can be glad you got to visit the wonderful world of his imagination once again. Quit being such foul creatures. 

 

Thanks for writing again Wiz, the story is pretty damn nice. :D

smalldeath22
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Wiz wrote it so i'll read it.

I have no idea what this story is about. I haven't read any chapters or even the description but Wizoftime wrote it so i'll read it!

 

(Even if it will go on hiatus half way through)

Pierre le loup
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I love the story, the character, everything is good.

The ability of the characer have a great future without being broken or anything else and that's good because it's very difficult to make a great scenario with an OP mc.

I just hope that the story will not be on hiatus and that's the real danger with this author (great idea, great writing, but HIATUS!!!!! ).

But thanks for the story nonetheless

And sorry for the grammar

Qanelar
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Well written, paints the world like a picture.

zero emotional value.

Lo and behold arogance vs arogance, bring along your e-penis to fully enjoy.

Ciaina
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ok. Good story, flimsy author

Since apparently review got removed because it did not review the work, here it is :

Well written, Nice story, solid characters, extremely likely to be dropped abrutly when author gets bored, like for his other works.

3/5 because only the fools dont learn from history.

Read it If you want a well written yet ultimately empty exercise in style.