Legacy of the Ancient

by Ezervane

Original Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Harem Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

In the world of Nazula, where magic and beasts exist, a hero left behind his legacy when he mysteriously vanishes.

Thousands years later, when abilities and talents are absolute necessities, a talentless orphaned boy named Cain is given a book by an old man who teaches him about fighting and magic.

Little does he know, the very book he is given is a useless treasure left behind by the hero.

With the help of useless treasure, Cain the talentless is ready to change his fate.


An original series by me, and Mega Chintasih as my grammar police. Cheers!

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(As of Chapter 3)

From what I can see so far, the story seems interesting enough and the author has a decent grasp of flow, pacing, tension, and especially good-quality dialogue. My main problem lies with the lack of descriptions and the reliance on "tell" (saying what happens) over "show" (describing what happens), but so far so good.