Accidental Merlin

by nadleeh

Original Action Adventure Historical Romance Female Lead Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Hello, my name is Emris smith. I was a not so normal medical tech working in a university hospital in england. I was sent on a 3 day conference course in Leicester and I got transported back in time to the 6th century England, except magic was real. This is story of how I became legend. How I became Merlin.

Also the origins of the word queen in the cross-dressing sense. But ignore that bit, i never actually wore womens clothes

 

P.S. First story, be kind. also this is not final edit, there will be some mistakes. i appologise in advance

P.P.S If you want to volunteer to edit the chaps feel free to post me a message in the comments

release schedule is looking like one or two chaps a week 3000wrds per.

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Azcheron
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Ignore the prologue, this story is amazing!

When I started the story I didn't really have my hopes up, I just saw it was in latest updates, had over 100 pages and wasn't abysmally rated. The prologue made me pause a bit and I almost didn't read it as I thought it might be another stupid parody story or something, boy am I glad I took the plunge and read it.

World Building: I know its not an 'actual' category, but I feel like it deserves one due to how much it matters in a story. I'm not sure how he does it but the Author really manages to make the world of his story seem alive, whether it was the modern world or SPOILER ALERT (Chapter 6 or 7 reveal I think?)

Spoiler: Spoiler

 The way he writes the surroundings, environment, and behaviours just really convinces me of the setting and makes it so much more immersive. 5/5

Style: The style flows seamlessly, I could read the story for hours and hours without getting bored. I was really surprised at how good the style was after reading the prologue, but honestly, it just stands up very well on its own.

Story: What can I say, some people like certain stories and others don't, as it happens this story is right up my alley, I love it and I would read more if I could. It's an original idea insofar as it hasn't been endlessly redone on RRL yet (like game-system apocalypse or something) so it's like a breath of fresh air. The plot seems solid so far, and the pacing is good. I can't wait to see how it goes.

Grammar: I wish every story had grammar like this. Its 5/5 and there's really nothing else to add, just good English. It's sad that this even has to be a section, but that's RRL ehh :P There are perhaps 1 or 2 typos per chapter (3k words) but really it doesn't detract from the story and is to all intents and purposes perfect as is.

Character: Well, there are only 100 pages as of writing so its hard to predict the future, but for now the characters seem well rounded enough, obviously there hasn't been enough time for any real development but seeing how the story excels in all other aspects I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and set 5/5. The characters are as good as they can really be this early.

Overall: No complaints, it's a good, well thought-out, readable story with an original idea which is well executed. I believe the story deserves more attention and support for more, faster releases.

Zassi12
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Feels Good and believeable

 I look forward to more havent read yet enough to make an accurate judgement but im hooked.

OwlGirl
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*may be spoilers

 

I was amazed at the plot and characters. I really enjoyed the humor but most of all the ingenuity of the story. I have read numerous back in time stories, and stories about magic, but this one is totally unique. It seems like a whole other universe, with our history but with werecats and magic. I don’t understand though how u made him think he is going to see his “present” family again, isn’t he in a different universe? or does the future not have magic? I am absolutely loving this book so far. Please release more chapters!