Dungeon Mastery

by Rokoran

Original Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Strategy Strong Lead Summoned Hero Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

If this was a light novel, it would probably be called something like "Why Won't Those Adventurers Just Let Me Build In Peace?!"

Unfortunately, even though I have a cheat, my life isn't quite that charmed.

Herein are contained the chronicles of one very exasperated Dungeon Core, formerly a human of Planet Earth.

 

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pyrtekh
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Very strong start. Actual good storytelling with interesting characters and a solid basis for further growth

Ringostrauss
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I read this because I love dungeon stories.  The first chapter is well written, the grammar is extremely good.  There is not enough content to do much more than review those. Will do a more advanced review when there is more to read.

Delectablebooklover8
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If I had to compare this book so far, I would compose it to an expensive wine. It's flavor (story so far) is smooth and begins to warm you up from the inside out the more you drink from it. It has a DEPTH of flavors as the story develops and is both well thought out and well considered while being portrayed for the readers. The different aspects that are hinted at across the story create different elements that only Add to the melody of flavors as they reach your tongue (mind). The pace so far isn't half bad as you don't have to rush to decipher the information as it crashes against your tongue (mind), nor are you left wanting for more while wondering where or when you're going to receive a new flavor/aspect of the story to play with across your senses (mind-scape)... This story makes one want to know more, at a leisurely pace of course, and one only needs to drink (read) more of this Wine to better understand the history and mechanics of this World bit by bit. Author, your portrayal of a dungeon story is well Done sir! Well Done I say!!! And I raise my glass to your written words! ^~^. I only have One complaint as i casually sip the last of this, the most recent, chapter... My damn glass is empty..... And while I Do understand that I'll have to wait to enjoy another glass or sip of this Wine (story) at a later date. The fact is...I'm HUNGRY.... and.I.Want.MORE... 

*coughs* 

Thank you for the chapter(s). 

I look forward to your future works! ^~^

Signed, a simple addict of good books/stories... 

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.....~ glares at empty glass some more~ ......

Donetaskdontask
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I hope this continues. It has been 13 days so far and the chances are not high..

 

Mu'er
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This is well written and has had an excellent start!

This is well written and has had an excellent start! It is seemingly not basic and the characters have had quite a bit of thought put into them. Hopefully the author remains at this level.

Sepi
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3 Chapters in, Five Stars already

Literally my only problem is that I want MOAAAAAAAR, but besides that, a different protag then normal, and so far some lovely side characters. I would recommend reading at least chapter two and if you hate that (for all of you reading this in the future) then drop it, but if you like it at all, you will love this book (again, if it goes the way I think it will... pleaaaaase)

shallowords
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This story is off to a great start. There is a lot of potential for fascinating and unconventional, perhaps even beautiful (in a show don't tell fashion) dungeon building.

Also, the third chapter oozes happiness, and that's always a nice thing

sdeligar
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Three Chapters and already hooked

Absolutely love the beginning of the story and really looking forward to more. I like the fact that I'm not stuck readying the start of a story with the same basic details and format as every other dungeon story starts with. As much as I enjoy dungeon stories I'm glad to see something new and different and can't wait to see what comes next.