Original ONGOING Action Adventure Romance Tragedy Female Lead Harem Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Reader interactive School Life Secret Identity Supernatural
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Losing a loved one is a big price to pay but what happens when that loved one is killed in front of you? A story about a weak teenage boy with a gift who wants to be a hero in a world where live Demons, Angels, Fallen Angels and The Gifted. A story about how he became the hero to save the world. It's your typical shounen style play filled with cliche's and also some unexpected turn of events.

Begin your journey with the All-Star Exorcist Silver Riser.

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 Look no further than the preview blurb to know what to expect in this story. In this case no, I don't mean what the story is about, but rather how badly written it is. The very first word "Loosing" is either misspelled or the wrong word is used. This is an example of the poor quality you'll experience for the entire story. Next, forgiving that mistake, you'll go to "Chapter 1" and the poll uses a instead of an. This type of mistake, poor writing, and general laziness of foregoing an editor or even proofreader completely sinks this story's ship. On top of all that the story is written like some cheap movie script or something. 


1 star for trying and another half for a decent idea, I guess, since writing is hard work. Please get a proofreader. 

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Unreadable. Learn to use quotation marks.

Using brackets to describe what people are doing shouldn't be done either.

I wish I could give this a higher score.