Original ONGOING Action Adventure Psychological Sci-fi Male Lead Martial Arts Reincarnation Strategy Strong Lead
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An alien race invaded the Earth on June 6, 2128. At the midst of this war, many nations allied with the alien threat and the war nearly wiped out the rebelling humans of the planet. At the edge of mankind's survival, the United Nations Army launched its forces to eliminate the immediate stellar threats that loomed over Earth.

General Seeker Carlean, commander and leader of the mission, risked and gave his life to destroy the immediate stellar threat. The battle was won though Earth lay in ruins. Perhaps mankind will live to see a a few years of peace before the alien threat returns to wipe out their existence.

At the immediate aftermath of the stellar battle, the fallen Seeker Carlean awakens and finds himself at aged 17, living the peaceful life he lived 16 years before he died.

So begins a new game in the battle for humanities survival.

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Kadark
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The pacing is subpar. Introduction (and exposition) is too long and the story fail to accelerate.

Personally, I don’t care if a fic’s power system is based on some random mumbo jumbo, but the one used in this one just give me nausea while reading it. Long paragraphs full of pseudo science and - worst offendant! - the basis of their superhuman capabilities is ‘humans only use 10% of their brains!’. A sentence you may have heard in a family gathering from someone with an utter lack of understanding of what it really entails.

Combined with the regular occurence of grammatical errors, I’m giving it a 2/5

O'kunnigan
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Holy crap. Been a long time (archon being the last time) since I actually felt excitement building as i started reading; this is gonna be an amazing ride no doubt.