Number One Under Heaven

by BaiSiwa

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Reincarnation Secret Identity Strong Lead Wuxia
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Born with a golden spoon in his mouth, Tian Yi is a young man with a status above all and below none.

However, that status came with a price— his freedom.

Tired of being confined in his home for his entire life, Tian Yi decided to leave for the outside world.

This is a story of an innocent young man who is perfect in every way with only one deficiency— his lack of common sense.

 

AN: This is a work of fiction, all names and places are made up. And please read the tags before you start reading.

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Crown
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For any new readers that aren't just flooding in here from the fandom around his original version, welcome to the amazingness that awaits. (So good I had to make up a word)

Everything he writes turns to gold so you can expect the same for this novel. Obviously I will adjust my review on the extreamly far off chance that it's not the most amazing thing on RRL. (Blasphomy!)

I just feel the need to give this a rating so that he can start getting people in here and reading. Without a doubt this will be at the top of the most popular list in no time at all so lets just get the five star review out of the way so that I can feel I've done my part to support BaiSiwa for the hours of entertainment I've enjoyed and with hope many more to come.

 

Quit reading this and start the story already.

ReanSchwarzer
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If this remake is as good as the original then in my opinion it will be one of the best novels on this website, love the story and the characters, the only thing I wished was different about the old version was slightly more time spent in the other realms before going to the mortal realm. Judging from the update of the author, it seems this matter will be changed in the re-work, really looking forward towards this story.

GalacticTNT
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He is back and better than ever. With a new way to start the same story I don't know where it will end up but it will most definitely be as good or better than the first version.

Grammer is good so far and characters are the same as well.

It is going a bit faster than before, but with a new version that is almost but expected. 

Heres hoping this story thrives once again as it should.

DDclash
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I can't say that it is bad. I just can't find some really good moments, so I am a little sad. I would have liked continuation of the first one. But well, beggars can't be choosers, can they?

theworld
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Love the original I died a little inside when I thought he quit writing permanently luckily he's back I have great expectations

NetLord
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Bai SiWa is back, enough said. I would think really.

HaremAddict1
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If its not broke do not Fix it!!

I was totally addicted to original version. I am not enjoying this version as much. The original was a great blend of action, comedy, and even a bit of drama (Touching scene when girl fails entrance exam had a bit of dirt in my eye). This version is very bland. I am very sad.

DoomsdayKing
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You better finish it please

I will update after ~50-100 . chapters 

I disagree with you rewriting but please finish it this time...

Also his gf with mask (best friend) better make them hook up early on and keep the harem!!! Add some XXX scenes in it tooo...... explicity and detailed

elq
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Looking forward to more

As a fan of the first iteration of this story, I can understand why people might be unhappy with a change... But after reading the first nine chapters I feel that while this version is different in details, it has the same "soul" as the original and very much look forward to how it will grow. 

Thanks BaiSawa!

OneTypePress
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In the re-write, there is definitely a  lot of problems. He is rushing the interactions and losing so much of the charm that was established in the original novel.

There is no real organic flow in this story, he has a checklist to 'establish' the main character's personality, but it feels exactly like it is a checklist: escape from the palace, meet the guide, show a funny scene where world common sense doesn't apply, finds beautiful lady join a sect. all within 6 chapters.

There is no chance to build the world, show the characters, learn about the main character organically.

Someone going into this novel without having read the original would find it very lacking but with "potential" which is bull shit, because this novel has already been written, and it is easy to see that it is only going to get worse from here.

 

It sucks, but the flare is gone, and this feels forced.