Learn to Evolve

by kleimore

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy LitRPG Magic Multiple Lead Characters School Life Summoned Hero Supernatural
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There have been many losers from Earth transported to other worlds who achieved greatness or died in the attempt.

In an Earth experiencing a change driven by transcendental forces, where common animals evolve into fantastical creatures and a common office worker can wake up to supernatural powers any day, a young boy appeared in an area affected by the burnt of that change. A loser from another world who went against the basic scheme of fate and came to Earth to achieve greatness or die in the attempt.

That boy will have to adapt to the new world and its foreign rules while having to cope with a crippled core, memory loss and a growing desire for revenge. That boy will have to learn to evolve.

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A few notes here and there. This might be a slow pace novel. I'm trying to develop (keyword being 'trying') my characters and things realistically and well. I don't want it to be chapter 10 and MC with 100 in each stat already and killing immortal beings. Things will be moving slow, but steady.

Cover art is not mine. Just using it because it looks cool and a bit how I want to shape my MC. If the creator wishes that I remove it, I will do so immediately.

Nothing else to say, thanks for reading and enjoy!

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DDclash
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Hope this story will be complete.

Well, now that I read till chapter seven, I can say, Chapter Zero is unneeded as of now, because I don't have a way to tie two worlds, with different characters 

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 Hope author enjoy writing, because I don't want a bad end for this novel.

P.s. This review was nearly deleted because RRL for some reason doesn't have a confirmation, it would have been better like this, would you like to delete this review?

P.s.s I was kinda sad that low level rats could do this, it has to be a hard task...

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For now, I am tentatively rating this as 5 🌟. While there was some initial confusion in the first chapter and a half, it was quickly cleared up.

I hope there are stat tables in later chapters, though the way the stats are presented early on are clear and concise; there is no useless clutter, and it seems like the numerical values aren't going to be absurdly high, even at higher levels.

All in all, this so far is a pleasant twist on the summoned hero/isekai trope, having the MC 'drifting' into Earth instead of Teren.

Good job, author! I'm looking forward to future developments!

Edit: We have tables! They look very straightforward and lovely.

On another note, I can confidently say this is quality writing and storytelling. While a majority of stories on this site fall somewhere between decent and horrendous pacing, Learn to Evolve doesn't; in fact, I would endeavor to say the pacing is near perfect, based on the chapters we've got so far. The author has managed to pull off their goal of slow and steady character development, though I think I might like a little more in depth interaction with the parental units, mostly because parents tend to be very neglected characters after their initial introduction.

Cancer
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So far so good. As of chapter 12 it has been a intresting world to read but I agree with everyone else, so far chapter 0 is not needed. (As of chapter 15 my thing about chapter zero is amended, I get it now)

TheBreakernew
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This is a pretty high quality story, and it has an interesting hook with a fresh take on a old genre. Really it has a lot of elements from litrpg, reverse transportation to a familiar yet new world, and cultivation elements.

tl;dr: It's good, and I'm looking forward to more.