The Storm King

by warden1207

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Harem Magic Male Lead Secret Identity Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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Leon and his father, Artorias, are the last remaining scions of a once powerful and illustrious family of lightning mages.  After barely surviving an attack that destroyed their home fifteen years ago, they now live in the dangerous Northern Vales, a desolate wilderness far away from civilization.  But those who want them dead are strong, patient, and relentless, and it is only a matter of time before they find the two they seek...


Posted first on my website,, which will be 4 chapters ahead of anywhere else I post.  Expect new chapters every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday around 12 noon CT


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This story is fantastic.  Grammar is spot-on.  It is xianxia style, nonetheless the story still has a western feel, in its treatement of characters, style and story.

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The story is well written and enganging and I can't wait for the next chapter

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 I'm really enyoying this story thus far. Keep it up friend.


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Good story thus far. Most of the story thus far are setup chapters but recently there's been some action. The author has a website of his own which is a couple of chapters said and is consistent with his 3 chapters a week schedule. 

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Really liked it until you put the harem tag

 What can i say?, the story seems interesting until the chapter i read (29) with a good foreshadowed plot and character development. Really enjoyed it until i saw you put the harem tag (i don't read or enjoy harems), but for all the people that don't have this issue, this story is definetly a good read and i recommend it to you.

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I've enjoyed this story so far but i wanna see a few more chapters befor going in depth with the review.