Test of Endurance

by supergrovermonster

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead LitRPG Male Lead Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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Tenacity Online is set to be the biggest Full Immmersion Virtual Reality (FIVR) game of the next decade. And they're going all out for the release, a yearlong streamed event. Two thousand of the world's most dedicated, competitive, and popular gamers will be going into full immersion. Catering to the word hardcore, T.O. is a game looking to shake up a player base jaded by over three decades of FIVR games. With no pain dampeners and zero tool assisted gaming, the year long event is set to be a grueling test of endurance for everyone involved.

Luke Castille is in a rut, in and out of the virtual world. Grinding out endless hours at a dead end job and trying to find time to play with a slowly failing guild of friends. Tenacity Online is his one chance to turn it all around, setting out to make something not only for himself but the people he counts as friends. Failure isn't an option and the clock is ticking. 

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novelguy
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Some flaws, but a great start.

I'm liking it so far, keep it coming! The MC knows his limits and isn't just stupidly lucking into things which I like. The world assumes that not everyone opposed to the MC is an idiot or has some secret dues ex plot.

Aspartame
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A whole lot of tell with little driving force behind it. I'm not sure what the story is about, or where it's going. I've got a hard drive full of games I could play instead of reading this, if all this has going for it is some dude playing a mediocre VR game in a mediocre manner. The hook is a Metoo grab, which just feels dirty.