Orb Of Oblivion [Dungeon Novel]
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With level ups and of course dungeons, thousands and thousands of them.
David Lee, an orphan with a lot going for him, but unfortunately he died tragically.
With an old family heairloom he is sent a a white terminal station where he meets a hot busty goddess.
Been given a three different choices, he chose to keep his old body which might had been a bad idea, reincarnation would be better, you get memories of the world you're in, a family, perhaps wealth, and the original body owners' skills.
Well now its too late to regret, he is in this new world all alone with a blank state, and an interface to show his status.
How will his ball handling skills fare in this dungeon filled world?
My Grammar is probably messy, but I swear to edit old chapters, with the help of you readers, I hope you will point out my mistakes and bad points so that I can fix it up, thanks.
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I have not given a review in a while, so bear with me. This story is in its early stages but it is shown to be good if not great. It is cliche with the transportation theme, but it does not matter. The best thing about the story currently is the way the author portrays David. He feels like a human and not a robot. Though the character development could use work of how they change, it is still great. I am excited to see how the story pans out.