The Genesis System

by ProfoundMagician

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Magic Strategy Supernatural
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Genesis. It is the end of countless stories. The end of thousands of universes, billions of planets, and trillions of lives. But what is taken may also be given, as shown in the story of Cael King. A young man of Earth, knowing only a life of study and work in the relentless and endless pursuit of satisfaction. This is the origin of his story.

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Inspired by the system used in The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound. The system is an homage but the characters, world, and story are unique. I will post as often as I can and, given that I am not starting work until July, that should be pretty frequently. If you have any suggestions or comments please feel free to leave them as this is my first story and I'd love to improve both it and my writing style.

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Ringostrauss
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Only downside is the writer just started.

This is well written, and while certainly this type of story has been done before, it is being done well here, and with enough originality that I can't wait to see where the author is going.  Thanks and good luck on your journey.

Edit: Having read a bit more, this is becoming one of my favorite stories period on Royal Road. Always keep us guessing :)

Toc
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At the moment there are seven chapters. I really like this story so far, it reminds me of "A Novel World" but seems faster paced which is nice. Although the story is new, I read nothing that seemed annoying or tedious. This easily made it into my favorites list.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

DrSupbro
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 This is a well written story that brings a sense of enjoyment to the reader like a good story should. Some inspiration has been taken from The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound in the term of paths, but nobody ever said an idea of paths was solely only allowed to be used by that story. It fits well with this story, and the original content is definitely there. 

The story itself is interesting, but nothing new to royalroad. At this point in time, originality is really hard to come by, so it is up to the author to make their story enjoyable. They could write the most cliche story, but if they add new things and put twists in there, it will leave the reader satisfied. Gensis does just this. An MC being stuck in a dungeon and having to power level with a game interface and classes in a world of magic+monsters after being transmigrated is nothing new. However, the presentation and little twists make the story just so enjoyable. 

I really wish this story had been going on for a year or so just to have that huge stockpile of chapters I would be able to dive right into, but believe me when I say that I will closely follow this one. It looks like it'll only get better. 

Psyren1596
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This is actually really good. The premise is not new, however the author add his own unique twist to it. I especially like Faul, he reminds me of Kisame from Naruto. 

The story style is great, and I have picked up little to no grammatical mistakes. 

EverShadow
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I'm very impressed with the quality of this story, especially considering that it only just started. LitRPG stories are easy to make fun for the first few chapters, but what is really impressive about this story is the planning for the future. From the teaser intros at the beginning of each chapter, to the chapters that take place from the view of a different character, I can tell the author has the world far more planned out than a usual beginning author. The one thing that I've noticed is that the main character's reaction to things is rather lukewarm or predictable. This is fine because it is the beginning of the story, and I can already see some more character development going on. I'm excited to see where this goes. Thanks for writing!

Aubis97
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Easily the best story I've seen on royal road recently. Really impressed with how the story is progressing.

geffen.nir
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This one is a hidden gem, with a rapidly developing story, and interesting world building.

I just wish the author would spend less time mentioning gains and focusing on the game mechanics and more on the characters.

That said, it's a good read, very well written and highly enjoyable :)