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After a couple of mysterious happenings on earth, Peter suddenly gets teleported into a weird forest filled with danger. Meanwhile Timothy, the creator of a new world, slowly grows mad.

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I wrote a couple of chapters for a project of mine, just posting here for critique. Hate it, love it? Please leave a comment or review.
The first few chapters can be pretty peculiar, however please bear with it.

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