Chaotic Berserker

Pretty promising, but if it\'s inspired in XIanxia we need a little bit of romance.That\'s the only thing i would say. Good grammar, some little mistakes , story progressing is OK nos too fast nor too slow

this story has HUGE amount of ILLOGICAL mistakes!! Some examples:

– Dragon sits on boys shoulder > boy suddenly takes off clothes and jumps in water > dragon complains about surprise of being in water > how?! (when boy has taken off the shirt, dragon had to get off obviously… )

– Dragon can BLUSH when embarassed!!! WTF?! (by all standarts blushing is a trait of humanoids. I cant even imagine how would the scaly lizard blush)

– Bandit squeezes a flower so its pollen would directly assault his enemy >>> Problem is, that the bandit should be the very first victim of the poison, cause he is holding the source of poison in his fucking hands!! Also Author uses AIR CARRIED poison  as some sort of laser beam that “in a blink of an eye” goes from the user to the enemy!! Thats not how AIR works.

– etc. (so many mistakes…)

These mistakes are obviously done, because author makes few chapters every day and he probably doesnt even check his own work … thats also reason for TERRIBLE TERRIBLE GRAMMAR!!!

(you should definitely start checking your own work, before you post this mess)

as for silly fighting scenes:

Majority of fights look so stupid. All characters act like idiots while fighting. Why?

They dont use their brain or any tactics. They just charge straight at enemy and hope they kill enemy before enemy gets them…

It comes even to the point, where characters DONT even try to avoid TRAPS or techniques! They just charge straight through and hope for best (they get killed! Duh).

I have only read to chapter 8

Naming sense: 0.25 stars - really awkward

Story pace: 1 star - too fast

Fighting: stupid = 0 stars

Dialogue: very little differentiation between the mob enemies; they're all cussers, HEAVY CUSSERS

MC: oddly over-reactive and excessively rude towards his father in the scenes so far given that he is not even a preteen yet

Mechanics: horribly not thought out

This is obviously written by a person who is unable to introspect or examine anything internally

The abrasive manner in which western bull is mixed with xianxia sh*t is really REALLY painful

I'm getting angrier remembering what i'v read while writing this review.

Long story short, this is really bad. It could be better if it was less infodump-y and more of a saga

at first I thought it was going to be like coiling dragon but it took a different turn and became very interesting.

the grammar: I saw some mistakes and the dialogue is kind of weird but it is still understandable

story: I like the story very much thought you missed some things that you should have explained like the currency in the story.

I also love that the chapters get added pretty fast thought the chapters are small.

I am looking forward for more.

I didn’t even start reading yet, but the grammar in the synopsis is already terrible. I’m afraid for what I’d be getting into when reading, but it looks interesting.

Read over it, and fix it. You'll attract more people.