Lonely Light (Complete)

by unice5656

Original Fantasy Romance Short Story Female Lead Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters

Arael is an otherworldly being from the upper plane, a place similar to Heaven, full of Light. He now dwells on Earth, touched by Darkness, unable to return. When he rescues Sariel, an innocent angel from the clutches of Dark mages, he is no longer alone for the first time in centuries, but knows that he must return her home before she is also stranded on Earth.

The question is, does she wish to go?

(Pure fantasy romance)

 

 

- Cover art credit goes to Cassandra DenHartog (www.cassandradenhartog.com)

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Mhykol
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I\'m really liking it so far, your grammars great and the story is easy to follow. I like the genre, a pure fantasy romance is always nice to read. It\'s easier on my heart then some other stories with a huge tragedy

Boartank
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I loved it so much. It's been a long time since I read stories like this.

The story is magical and just absolutely perfect reading while snuggling with a loved one.

 

Any chance of this turning into a full length novel? Or a movie, perhaps? <3

Shoga
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Beautiful, Simply Beautiful

i was feeling down, and found this by accident.  thank you unice5656, i really needed this story.  i love it.

GxC
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Short story, but definitly worth it. The grammar was easy to read and expressed the emotion that the author wanted to express, which was beautiful! So heartwarming that my inner darkness became pink, hahaha!!! xD

Although there were grammatical error, it rarely happened that I almost did not notice and it didn't really disrupt the story.

I must say, for a love story, it really was a good one. I'm sorry for not giving a more informative review since I rarely do one and hopefully dorgive my bad grammars. I just want to say to the people who have not read this yet, that this definitly is worth reading. I thank you very much Author-san for letting me read this story of yours.

 

 

 

littel
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how come short stories are the ones with the most feels ?

absolutely beautiful , not sure why it wasn't into the top rankings before , but it needs to be higher so everyone can give it a try. 

saganatsu
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Enjoyable and nice to read.

Good that it didn\'t try to last longer: female MC lacks (for story reasons) enough personality & initiative to sustain a longer work.

Chaos Rabbit
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I loved this story! It was short but full of emotion. Thank You

Renl
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Absolutely Beautiful!

Love the characters and world building! I find the concept of light and darkness connected to character development to be fascinating. The grammar was wonderful and the emotions were portrayed very well. This story is a MUST read!

newgen333
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A splendid blend of feelings and emotion waves over you in this one. It opens a gate of a fateful encounter in a lonely world that only you are one of a kind whilst in an encounter of fate enraptures one more in this beautiful story of love and desire flooding though like dragons and the silent thoughts of a lonely souls mind and a fresh new souls thoughts combine in a love that'd make anyone shed tears and clap in the end. 5/5. Amazing!

Etez
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Awesome  T-T

 

Want more T-T