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Couple of you guys suggested to change this old news thread into one that lists the changes between the book one on RRL and the book 1 on Amazon. Good idea.

At the end of Book 1, there is a scene where Diana's slime form devours Sir Koran. This has changed significantly in order to slow down the pacing of the story. The slime should not have had intelligence right after being born, and hugging to death rather than revenge devouring makes more emotional impact.

2. Avatar information was changed into chosen of the gods. Rather than being the 'chosen avatar' of the dungeon, the world now possess certain members of the races who are chosen by their patrons gods. They have certain abilities and special destinies as a result. The change, then, is that Diana switches from being a chosen of her god to being a chosen of Doc, who has a lesser form of the same authority. Naturally, when she died her soul was delivered to her patron, that being Doc

3. Slime hero was erased. No plans to create a race of slime humanoids. No need to elaborate, that was just plain silly on my part.

4. The minerals available were changed a bit, as Claire had examples of most precious metals on her as art of a "introducitonpacket" for Doc

5. The queen can talk through a magic device she wears around her throat. Naturally, it's not a pretty sounding voice

6. The whole shadow plot is a little more shadowly and a little less, er, obvious

Basically it. I'll do the same for Book 2 when the editing is finished
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Knight22 @Knight22 ago

I think i missed something. Best wishes!

The Pale Rider @The Pale Rider ago

Maybe you should cut down the alcohol? Of course only if it is your liver that's malfunctioning :)

blackfear2 @blackfear2 ago

i thought author san was rip in slimeronis (sry had to), glad to see you didnt dissolve into nothingness (sry had to) , glad to slime you back(yep im not sry)

thnx for not abbandoning those slime puns were waiting for some weeks

Pyro411 @Pyro411 ago

May the Angels of the battlefield "Nurses" swat those evil doctors and deliver you to a speedy recovery to a healthy state.

Get well soon :)

Damhi @Damhi ago

ok first dungeon games and now you too... did you guys plan it out ? (well at least you're still in the mood for working on your ff so that's somewhat where you guys differ(as the author of dungeon games doesn't seem too be that spirited to work on his story anymore ( or at least for now) .
heck I even think you 2 fell out at more or less the same moment xD

ShamelessLeech @ShamelessLeech ago

Glad you're still alive and kicking. Take time to recuperate, we'll re-read till your ready and your malpractice suit is over.

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Lomyril @Lomyril ago

Good luck and hope you get well soon!

j0nn0 @j0nn0 ago

I hope you get better soon.

About the polls, you can either tick the poll option when making a thread before you hit submit or you can edit the first post of a thread to add a poll.

... I feel that I missed something... Darn my habit of sleeping in.

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