Logical Labyrinth

by chaos234

Original Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Romance Magic Male Lead
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A man named Jasper got devoured by a worm on his way home and he found himself in the middle of the forest only to find out that this is not his world. The world is strange in a sense since there are message box and it look like a world made from an MMORPG games. At first he thinks that he is just dreaming but as the time past, he felt that this is now his reality. This is my first story so feel free to criticize so that i can improve my writing skills better.

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Its a good western feeling story

I like the story because its an intresting world with defiened rules the mc may not be so indresting but as a hole is very pleasand but some deaths that are passed away not so much talking and still no one questions about the people that the left behind nut the story goods are that diferent to the to most storys here is that they are a mmo team that is not seen often