Legends of Zyantra: Immortals (Dropped...)

by AaronDragon

Original Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Horror LitRPG Psychological Romance Tragedy Harem Virtual Reality
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In the year 2111, the world known as Earth is controlled by 7 Mega Corporations that each hold sway over a content and all the things on it. The world is a place where there are no longer wars and people no longer go unemployed or starve, but the poor are often forced to work for their entire lives while the rich are free to live as they please. A world where corporate espionage, sabotage, and takeovers have become the new major conflicts amongst world powers, all while terrorism and resistance movements prey on the common people only trying to eke out a living. This is also the world that Allen Welkos and his family are leaving behind forever, as he and his family become immortal by casting aside their mortal coils and having their minds become pure data. But will this prove to be the perfect immortality solution that they first thought? Join Allen as he begins his new life in the vast world of Zyantra, the latest and greatest creation of the Ledgewig Corporation that will take the VR gaming community by storm. [{(Note, this story contains: torture, gore, violence, sexual content, and other mature stuff. read at your own risk.)}]

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Hexwolfx
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Take that you haters you want to miss with a good series

Natsume
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It's a pretty great story

The story potential is reaally great.It's also fun to read and there's not much problem with it.Still not a lot of chapters but it's already considered as one of my top story to read.

bradyman50
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Yet  another amazing story by AaronDragon. It is much less dark than BB, and in my opinion slightly better. The characters are interesting, the grammar is great, and I am not really sure what I am supposed to say about the style, but I personally find it very enjoyable. So basically, read this book.

AaronDragon
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Because I'm shameless and have no qualms about doing this....... Again.......

What can I say? I wrote the thing so of course it'll be amazing..............

Alright fine, I’ll be serious……. I’ll make a REAL review………

 

Ok so this is my own take on the VRMMO LitRPG ficton, a story that could probably be made better if I ever learned to code tables and stuff into my posts. But I can’t and I don’t really expect to be able to within this fiction in the future, so lower that expectation here. This story is also in the same multiverse as all my other stories, but don’t expect any cross-overy parts or hints to another story. L.Z:I is a story that’ll be largely isolated from all the lore from the other stories, until I decide whether or not to do that massive crossover final fiction to end them all in some grand second ending (happened but didn’t really ever happen) sequel to all the stories…..

 

Style: Since I’m the one righting it expect ellipses everywhere because that’s just how I do….. oh and I’ll also abuse captalisation horribly in this story as well…… but if you see any random text size changes THAT’S RR and not me…… damn conversion issues from copying and pasting from Word………

Grammar: The grammar should be fine and everything should be nice and easily readibles with no engrish or google translate type posts, even without my own editing and cleaning up after the initial posting of a chapter.

Story: The story is my own original idea with minor influences from other stories, shows, and other forms of fictional media.

Character: the MC will be a lot more on the good side of the good/evil spectrum of things than you’ll see in any of my other currant stories. I’m going with a Dark Hero type personality that wants to try being the bad guy but draws the line at certain things and has no problem saving people in need. Should be an interesting balancing act to manage and write. The other characters I will try to flesh out and give depth, but hey…………

Was that in the right order? No it wasn’t, but I’m the author of this fiction and I make the stuff you read for free……. Don’t be so judgey about the order my review of my own fiction went in…… gosh………..

hayazi96
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5 stars for ending it like it meant nothing to readers.