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Jake and the Dynamo
by D. G. D. Davidson
THE UNIVERSE IS OUT TO GET HIM.
BUT THE UNIVERSE HAS MET ITS MATCH.
Jake Blatowski just wants to go to high school, but when a computer glitch assigns him to the fifth grade, he has to sit next to the perpetually surly troublemaker Dana Volt, who's bent on making his life a living hell.
However, Jake soon discovers that Dana is secretly a member of a coalition of young girls tasked with protecting humanity from the forces of evil. Not only that, but the deadly monsters plaguing the city have chosen a new target, and that target is Jake!
Now Dana is the only one who can save Jake from certain death—and Jake might be the only one who can save Dana from herself.
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- Total Views :
- 23,945
- Average Views :
- 684
- Followers :
- 51
- Favorites :
- 10
- Ratings :
- 13
- Pages :
- 600
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Suprising surpise
Well i normally woudn't read something with a story like this, but i wanted something stupid to take my mind off things.
Honestly im pleasantly surprised. It is quite nice and the views dont do it justice, it has funny references (Most of wich i didn't understand due to lack of knowledge on the subject), and shows the good the bad and the ugly of a dying race.
As for the writing style, it starts a bit scaterred but it becomes deeper with each chapter. By the end of chapet 18 i already want more of it (Though on sites like theese its an epty dream).
All in all ill give it 4 stars with a recomendtaion to the author to rewrite some of the first chapters when he feels like it. And recomend you give it a shot.
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This story is definitely exceed my expectation about magical girls. Lot of them die then more random magical girls show up makinig friends, enemies, etc. Then there is Jake, a magical side kick that somehow surived all of the bullshit that throw at him. I like the characters that give a more than just "magical girls shoot lazer out of their hands and call it a day".
Keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to see Jake turn into a magical girl XD.