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Two Worlds is a military sci-fi web serial set several hundred years in the future. It will follow multiple characters in an expansive universe as they fight to survive where things aren’t always as they seem; or they are and they’re just [email protected]#t out of luck.

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The Two Worlds universe is being reviewed, edited, and pubished in eBook form. Own your own piece of the Two Worlds Saga starting with Two Worlds: Rags & Riches

Don't forget to check out the Two Worlds stand alone story The First Shot

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F.Dj
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Premium Work for Free, Who Doesn't Wan't It ?!

This is my 7th attempt trying to write review, you don't have any idea how hard it is writing it from mobile phone. RRL really had some problem with mobile browser, it really test your patience *#$%@*#

 

Let's get going to the topic shall we,

# Style: 5 Cookies

- The story is a very well written, especially the story telling style is exquisite. Such things are somethings you could expect from premium works or published books. The story pace flow nicely and smooth, it leaves no blank gaps and makes your reading immersion enjoyable. I say this one are definitely one of the very best works in RRL!

# Story: 5 Cookies

- This is more like dark sci-fi, one of the best. There are very few works here in RRL that had a high quality or worth mentioning. If you're looking for a really good reading, you should try it, I absolutely recommend it.

I can see the story was well planned, I can't quite found any faults that I can spring some salt or acid on it, well done! The story it self revolve around two protagonists with a stark contrast. One is the lowest of the low and the other is the highest of the high, but both goes in the same direction/theme. It tells about the space faring humanity, the society struggle, and the global crisis. I won't go into details about the story and leaks some spoilers, you should read it yourself. What I like to point here, the story were made with the quite the realistic and logical scenarios. You won't find xianxia's big BS, Jap's LN absurdness or other misfit here. That's a big plus on my book.

# Grammar: 5 Cookies

- My grammar is suck, but I know it is a good thing when I see it, and it was flawless (in my opinion). I can't even find typos, like I said before, it is well written.

# Characters: 4 Cookies

- It is quite fascinating seeing the two opposite characters development, especially when it imbued with quite the realistic psychology. But at some part (Cole char), it get exaggerated and  a bit awkward. Well, Cole is the biggest jackass ever with some anger issues. It is weird when he suddenly turned almost 180' and cool down in a day in front of a girl he just met and knew nothing. That's why I give it 4 cookies, I had nothing else to mention, it's all good.

# Conclusion: 5 Cookies or 9/10

- You know this is worth your time when you read it. This story is definitely a hidden gem buried in a pile of less worth stories in RRL. It didn't get the high attentions it should get, what a let down, seriously. So folk, lets show some gratitude for this fine and FREE premium work by helping it climbing the charts and make it be known. Don't let it be buried under the mud!

ZarxMoon
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Every time there's an update, I run towards the chapter wanting to devour it.The story keeps me on fire and the story development makes my blood boil with anticipation,especially the action which always manages to keep me thether hooked...

Grayshade
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Sci-Fi at it's finest!

I prefer fantasy overe Sci-Fi, but I read this in 1 sitting.

I am looking forward to more chapters.

 

I rated Grammar and Style at 5 since there's nothing I could really find wrong with them, for Character I put a 4 since there's still things weird or simply unexplained, like the teenager's anger at the whole world. Or maybe he's just dumb.
Would have thought, if he was forced to join the military he'd try to make things comfortable for himself. Also, he's literally disrespecting his superiors for no reason other than because he's a "rat". I don't really understand that. Why? It's like shooting yourself in the foot and bragging about how you don't feel the pain, while you cry.

Story is 4.5 for now. I was torn between 4.0 or 5.0 since it was not THAT interesting up till now and it's progressing slowly, maybe a small part of that is alot of details you added. That's a negative for now, but could be a positive in the future, when there's way more chapters out.

 

I'll stick around and read the next few chapters and then maybe change my review! DO continue writing please.

guywithgunz
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Every writer has their own way of putting accross their story. I for one like this style when there are multiple characters doing multiple things at the same time ..... So I'm happy.

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly.

Killashard
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One of the best stories on RR

This is a true sci-fi story.  It is also one of the best stories to grace Royal Road.  I just binged-read over 70 chapters and was sucked in from the very beginning.  The writing style, characters, grammatical expertise...  There is no point in trying to explain how great this story is.  Read it.  You will not be dissapointed.

Tolack
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I don't know what to say.

I mean, this story is really good. But currently, I'm out of brain juice and running on fumes. The only thing I know is that I want more people to read this. Since my mind can't come up with a good review, I'll use the stars instead. Thanks for the story.

Darkland
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sorry i too dont know what to say in this review, i'm just here to show my support.

I like your universe(world) building, like the protagonists, but cant wait for their growth and gold and coop meeting.

Tallywort
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Great story, too many PoV for my taste

Honestly I'd like it better if I cared for half of the main characters. They might even have a link to the other characters... sort of. But as it is, I'm simply ignoring chapters from PoVs I don't care about, and I don't seem to be losing out on the story.

Albyihat
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Great story, very few errors. I am so used to reading stories with no proofread on this site the author really cleans his posts up. One of the best I've read on RRL

Cruxio
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Boring. You should've tagged it with Slice of Life too

Style - Not my style. In fact using various POVs with people with different backgrounds with no relation whatsoever is pretty annoying/dull/lacking. Maybe ill read it later when the story finally shifts into high gear.

Story - 3 Meh. Sure the future setting is nice. But the mentality of each character hasn't adapted to it. It's like watching futuristic movie but the actors are 18th century colonists.

Grammar - 5/5. Thats what this story is good for. The dialogues are in character but you can only do much when the topic isn't that much interesting.

Character - Full of streamlined characters.

Its slow, and you should update your story's synopsis with a more in-depth description of where your story is actually leading.