Infinity Games! Litrpg/Terror Infity-esqe story

Infinity Games! Litrpg/Terror Infity-esqe story

by Etnalla

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People from different world all summoned to participate in a game. A game that will take them through multiple realities and countless realms in a grand adventure where life and death will be decided in the blink of an eye. Will they finish the game and reach its end? Or will they fall before they even catch a glimpse of the finish line? Where the threat of death grows with every moment. Where hoping to survive is as useless as hope itself. Strength! Glory! Power! Are you not entertained!? Welcome to the world of Infinity Games!

 

 

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I do not place reviews simply couse I firmly believe that One(the reader) can't simply place any opinion without bias on some kind of subject. Even more if he/she enjoys the novel/work. The outlook is biased the more one likes something.

Hence all the internet trolls and whatever. The other thing is, I am not a native speaker so my judgement may have even more points that are foreign/underciferable/whatever.

The most defining factor is You simply can't quantity a work of art. It's like a taste/sense of style, everyone has their own just like an as*(harshly and with no eloquence/taste), everyone has their own, and no one gives a s*it about others(maybe if one is of the unnatural sort(the ones that poke the wrong hole)[be aware that it is my opinion, the way I see the world if it's offends you I simply don't give a s*it, be offended it's your right, the same right I have to be disgusted by you, be aware that by no means I am no homophobe simply couse I don't fear them and If you have something between your ears, you will know that phobia is a fear, a distaste, a disgust I may have to them but in no words it may be named a phobia, so stfu with your nworld way of life I don't need it, I may name myself as a conservatist just as I have all right to it(the thing that make me need to place this whole big disclaimed also disgust me, why the f*ck do I need to describe my point of view only becouse some old f*ck propagates some political corectness and the rest of the lemmings will bow to it).])

 

So after this whole unneeded descriptions. Your work is a bunch of s*it.

I did not read it. I will not read it. The title is a first glimpse upon your work. It portrays the thing that the reader will expect in your novel. And the title of your novel dear sir/madam is unbelivable. Youi are an author. You should be aware that the outlook/the face of this page is worth a kick or two to the asses of the onse that thought that it is an upgrade.(The old latest updates page was delicous, it was a heaven. You had muliple novels updates placed on one page, if you as a reader wanted you woul click and had a summary and an image of the cover. Now some wise f*ck decided that it's a brilliant idea to place all the novels in the latest updates bearing the cover and so on at the page reducing the ammount of things that are able to be placed at one page. Where at one time there where multiple titles and if some cahtched your fancy you could click it and enlarge the desription and the cover, now we have all this s*it enlarged no matter if we want or not, where once we could witnesss many now what, 15, 20 or maybe 30 positions, a rather magnificent update. ) No matter as I written, a tittle and summary is a first glance upon a novel. So I will with all right and thought bestowed upon me by a title of a typical RRoad leach of a reader vote with all might of my insignificant voice for a big minus simply couse

"A Japanese-style supernatural high school slice-of-life comedy that will eventually genre shift into a battle shonen with wuxia cultivation and face slapping; where tropes and cliches are praised instead of reviled, and the author puts obscure references that nobody gets in every chapter or .................. for short, however, if that title is too long and difficult to say in one breath this story may also be referred to by the technically appropriate title of Other-Natural. "

 

Let it be a reminder,  to not to do something along the lines of your novel title.

Misery's End
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Don't know why but a combination of that block of text you call a title, use of every possible tag, and only 5ish pages of text just pisses me off. Instead of testing the limits of the character limits for title put more effort into the body of your novel.