Dex's Adventure Through The Elemental Nations (Completed)

by Kestix

Fan Fiction Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead
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Clair/Dex is bored of her first life, so she/he decides to end it and see what happens after death. But his/her system has an update and new possibilities arise. Now he/she's going to live as Naruto with some extras, but was it the right decision to change the childhood difficulty from Normal to Very Hard? Read it yourself and see what changes Dex will bring. Here comes the chicken eating and crazy being called Dex. We all hope the Elemental Nations are ready for him. --------------------------------------- My second story, hope it will have a better start than the first one. Clair will be OP, just not as OP as previously. She will also start fairly weak, cause she is a baby..... Have a funny read. There might come more tags, like reader Interactive or Romance, but again I'm not sure. Don't know if I have to say it, but I don't know anything from the Naruto Universe, I only own the new things I introduce and naturally Dex.

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Jyulegacy
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This story can become anything

I really loved S1, although it started quite badly it was epic throughout with the OPness of clair and dex.

Kinda felt like a Tutorial to how the universe works and everything and what happens when clair/dex has too much power to enjoy the world he/she was sent to.

And now after the tutorial is over we find outselves in a naruto crossover where the mc has thousands of different choices they can make and even after you have exhausted the naruto universe and reached the end of the original naruto story(which will be greatly changed by mcs choices) you can easily redo the suicide or live to end of lifespan and then choose another universe you love like one piece.

Or go onto a wuxia or another fantasy world with a less op dex/clair.

 

So many things you can do and your imagination is the limit i really hope you continue this series as i've been a fan of dex/claires adventure for a while now, my only regret is that it isn't as popular as it should be.

zharaoh
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Just beginning but high hopes and expectations

So far it has just begun so this may be a bit premature but here it is.

Following the original storyline, this sequel promises to be harder for the main character but allow her.., err now permanently him, to still be powerful from birth albeit not godly. 

I am loving this writer and appreciate all the work thus far. The first chapter was strong and I believe will be able to give what is promised. I can't say much but to me I feel that it was a strong start. Great character. Always loved the naruto life. Enjoy the boxes. That's all for the start. 

I will say that I wasn't expecting the points and kinda expected more, but I know that I'm biased and on her side. I am excited to see the main stay one sex though.

gaigous
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THIS NEEDS MORE PASTRIES AND LOVE NOW!

But seriously anyone who liked the first series will love this one as well, We need more readers to feed this great fiction with our cake and devotion!!

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Good read but not for everyone.

Starting off i have read up to chapter 60 as of now. I will keep spoliors at a minimum but this review is highly opinionated i suggest you read the story first. And if you dont you read this story still and form your own oppinons no matter. what. 

You have been warned.

 

 

 

I find the best parts of these books are at the beginning when the mc. Is at he/shes most human and the character interactions i find are the streangh of the book. 

Setting. While this story is taking place in the Naruto world i find this unimportani and agree with what the author says, this is a fanfic. A story in a already devolped world where as a author you can play with some things and change others in what ever way. If you are reading for a almost cannon story with little changes. You are reading the wrong book.

While many things are change, some for better or worse. One thing the author succeeds at. Is taking a shonen manga and making the character more realistic. Which in my book is a huge achievement. 

In my opinion the worst character is clair/dex while there are no obviously flaw in the MC. Most decisions he makes are rational in some way. Be it from "you made my life living hell i am going to kill you" to "because i feel like it."  Thouse are fine. My problem is that he is the least human person in the story. It is made very apparent earlt on in first 7 chapters i think. That there is no consequence to anything. MC dies he will just revive. Some one dies? MC can revive them. At one point he decides to do something that will result in the deathes of thoused of people because it makes thing intreating. Literally the next chapter the author says he did this because to him there is no consequence of his action. Honestly i am hopeing that this will lead to the death of some one he cares about.

Even his flaws are inhuman. While most flawes are a bie product of someone pointing out a pattren in the authors writting, but instead of slowly pointing these out over time. Or in some more gradual way. There are intire sections of chapters dedicated to pointing these flawes out. Which causes mc to notice flaw but not care. Or try and fix them in some way but as a reader we see no diffrence. Causing a flaw that is suppose to make MC seem more human but make him seem more distant. And the longer the story goes the more this happens and i start to dislike the MC.

  Plot. Is perfectly fine. There is reason for what happens and i feel likein most cases that for every action therw is usely an appropriate human reaction. While there are flawes and plot holes unless your looking or binge reading this book you will likly not notice them or just glance them over with out thought.

Style.  This is the hard category. In termes of writing style. There are repeating points the description are good and the is a distinctive way of writing involved. 

In term of genre, it is harder to tell. While everything point to this being a soft hearted book. Be it the op mc, no consequence to actions.  But like that tupe of story there is little developed relationships between mc and other character's. Can be very dark at times. The only 3 people he cares about he willing states he will discared the 2 of for the love intrest. Who i think is the worst character for mostly same reasons as mc. Other than being a bit more human, but falles to sevral cliches and is probley the most shallow. And there are about zero comedy element. Making the story very hard in my opinion to determine.

Grammar. Gets better as story goes on. Early chapter have plenty of misspells but only a few that break story flow.

So my final oppion is that there are many flawes l, but this is my opinion there are plenty of people who like this story. I did to at the start. 

It is also likly that while i said the setting did not matter. Deep down some of the rhings done, did rub me the wrong way. But they for the most part were done in a way that was logical from a story stand point. 

So give the book a read. It is worth it. I personally like the authors first book a lot more. But that is just me.

cernaev95
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Never thought a naruto story could be this good. Respect.

Devil's Oblivion
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I swear it's the most amazing story of naruto... adaptation or fanfiction?

Yeah never in my wildest dream naruto could be this amazing!

The author even taking advantage of any event in Naturo to futher develop the story into something more incredible and fascinating!

But, somewhere when dex in his 4 or 5? the pace started to change and running at the speed of light.

Whooosh

He power up too fast and become too OP. It toppled the power balance of the world, and it's a parasite in amazing story.

He started to resurrect the dead. I mean, real back to life.

Then followed by the resurrection of the Uzumaki Clan done by a 8 years old gaki. it felt rushed and it's break the enjoyment of this magnificent story.

Edo Tensei is feared in the Naruto world and known as taboo, but here we have a Revival of the dead without side effect.

Do you people know what it mean?

Is he tying to start the holy war or something? it would make the whole world feared his clan even more than before and pit the world against him.

Unkillable Clan?

Immortal Clan?

lol Tragedy.

Afulina1
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 How often r u going to update the story? Once a week ? Or daily 

gr2
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I loved the first story and had high expectations for this one too and I must say, I am fully satisfied wth it so far.. 

Sobek
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This is a good adaptation of Naruto into Dex and Clair. There are a couple minor issues I have with it, Such as the characters going along to easily with Dexs' plans especially Minato who was litterally a kage of the hidden leaf and now supports plans to destroy it just cause of a little cynisism. 

 

Another thing I don't like is how Narutos' parents just agree to call him Dex. Like really? They sacrafice their lives and name him Naruto and now they're just like. 'meh ok' 

 

Those are just some of my issues and they are my opinion, so If anyone else feels differently i dont care (KYS)

Jdrocks000
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Just starting to read this novel however I enjoy the last one. So keep up the good work. 

 

Ps whats with the novel cover?