Original Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Cyberpunk LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Virtual Reality
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13+ Swearing and Gore. (A LitRPG series.) (Sexual content contained within spoilers)

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As such I've had to take them down from RRL.

The Jukal Empire’s fleets can’t keep back the aggressive species. An idea is fielded, create Emerilia, a world of magic, Dwarves, Elves and fantasy characters.

They can grow cycles of human Players, conditioned in a simulation of Earth to make them want to play Emerilia. The humans were a mighty foe for the Jukal Empire, but with their inhibitions gone and the morality of a game never in question, they can hold back the tide of the Aggressive species while calling it fun.

What's the best way to control slaves? Make them think that they're free.

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue Reality Within A Game ago
Chapter 1: The Perfect life ago
Chapter 2: Start ago
Chapter 3: Taking in the view ago
Benvari Mountains Prologue ago
BM Chapter 1: Brightest Day ago
BM Chapter 2: The Stone Price ago
Maps!!! ago
For The Guild Chapter 1: Selhi Capital + Prologue ago
FTG Chapter 2: Business Venture ago
FTG Chapter 3: Monster Hunting Pays the Bills ago
New Horizons Maps ago
NH Chapter 1: Six Months ago
NH Chapter 2: End In Sight ago
NH Chapter 3: Welcome To The Guild ago
TIOL Chapter 1: Eye Opener ago
TIOL Chapter 2: Make Ready For War ago
TIOL Chapter 3: Softening Up The Opposition ago
Maps! Updated Vers! ago
SRR Prologue ago
SRR Chapter 1: To The Grind ago
SRR Chapter 2: In High Towers and Back Rooms ago
TOC Chapter 1: Forwards ago
TOC Chapter 2: Projects’ Room ago
TOC Chapter 3: Dwarven Tournament ago
BAE Chapter 1: Beyond the Expected ago
BAE Chapter 2: Pandora’s Box ago
M&L Chapter 1: Welcome to Emerilia ago
M&L Chapter 2: A Change Overnight ago
TPM Chapter 1: Inner Turmoil ago
TPM Chapter 2: Loss and Purpose ago
TPM Chapter 3: Flying Citadels’ Advance ago
EB Chapter 1: Changing of the Old to New ago
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MysteriousGuyWithAMoustache
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Quite depressed there aren't more chapters! >-<

Damn this is amusing, not really in the mood to write a long review but summarising it. 

It has a very unique viewpoint and not many novels do this anymore or I've just not been reading the right ones, I do not want to spoil anything but the idea is similar to 'The Matrix' but it is far more technologically advanced and they have multiple reasons in doing so such as military potential and scouting enemy territory, I'm still not sure how they managed to capture all the humans and place them in a simulation as this sort of ruins the plot being they're so spread out and hide in so many different places it would be impossible to wipe them out, but apparently they can be captured? (EDIT: It was updated and is included now.)

Also the MC has a high-spirited character who craves normality which makes him overwork himself without realising it and only thinking it's normal or he is just embracing the change and enjoying it, which is far more likely, either way I enjoyed the novel to the point I ignored my previous remark and made a long-ish review.

InsaneChemist
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Please, by all the gods above and below, do not drop this story. I am enjoying it a great deal, and I don't want to have to add it to the lengthy list of dropped fictions.

Even if your story isn't super popular, as long as you exist and keep going you will accumulate followers by virtue of being the metaphorical last man standing.

To get to the negatives,  your story is not amazingly original. The concept has been done, and done both better and worse. However, it is extremely well done and avoids all of the worst pitfalls of the genre.Just the fact that it is still going makes it good.

On a mechanistic side, your grammar is superb. I can hardly claim to be an expert on the English Language, but I didn't notice any glaring mistakes.

 

Becca
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Can't wait for the next chapter

Have been reading since the first chapter was posted....loving it!  

Yggdrasil
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Amazing! Worth to be No. 1

Amazing is all i can say .

At first i thout it would be a mind f*ck story so skipped it

.Now that ive read it omg its good .

 

I gave it 5 stars becouse you deserve it .

Tolack
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Why use that tech on humans?

I have to agree with Meurlorg. As someone who read the prologue, I love the idea, but I'm completely conflicted on the reasoning and outcome. I mean, if you have technology that lets you simulate a virtual reality and RESPAWN people, why would you use such technology on a race you'd want to eliminate? "Give the humans a purpose or exterminate them" the alien Emperor commands. So you use that to justify spending a ridiculous amount of resources on respawning and "leveling" humans instead of your own race!? "Let the humans die in place of my own troops" the alien general comments. HOLY SHIT! You have a huge, highly trained army of YOUR OWN SPECIES and instead of using this expensive respawn and leveling tech on them you'd use it on humans instead? What are they thinking!?!?

 

Not only all that, the reasoning behind wanting to eliminate humanity is mind-boggling! "We make a peace treaty with one human group yet others raid our ships or attack us, so we'll kill all of them". WTF!? I think I wrote in the comments of the prologue "have these aliens never experienced civil war? betrayal? banditry? criminals? are these concepts really that 'alien' to these aliens!? They decide to eliminate or manipulate humanity because humans have different factions? They then make a "VRMMORPG" for these humans to make STRONGER, RESPAWNABLE, human factions? I really, really, wanted to read this story, but my mind just can't get past the prologue without some help. Please, please! Please help me by fixing these logic errors and loop holes so I can read this story! Going by the 4.6 star rating, this should be really good, so please fix it!

catbearpenguin
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Amazing Looking forward to more

AMazeballs. wicked start hope the following chapter's flow fast and are of the same quality

Silva
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Can't wait for next chapter.

Original Idea and good development. Characters are interesting. Definitely going to keep reading!

NuitBlanche
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Well... Mister Chatfield is incredible. His update speed is insane and the story is by itself wonderful !

Voilà !

Tranok
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Advertising teasers with little substance

While the actual story is engaging, there is precious little of it to see.  Instead we get a series of book teasers followed by a reminder to purchase the full novels on Amazon.

BookWorm84
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Original. Well Thought out. Awesome Start.

Don't stop!  Keep them chapters coming!  Love what you've done with the plot and setup.  

 

I like your MC and his talents.  I am looking forward to new chapters and learning about the world, stats, and mechanics.