The Arcane Emperor

by Aternus

Original Action Adventure Comedy Drama Fantasy LitRPG Romance Anti-Hero Lead Harem Magic Male Lead Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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Rainer, an amateur arcanist and college student, sought to create a new spell far surpassing the magic of the few he inherited from his grandfather. Yet the interference of an unknown event during the casting of his spell led him to be thrown through space and time.

Where status screens were accepted as normal and class distinctions were quite clear. Leveling and achieving a class beyond a simple farmer or peddler was an affair of life and death combined with years of hard training. Goblins were not the fodder that they should be, orcs filled bedtime stories in order to scare children into behaving, and a dragon? You might as well pack up and move to another country.

He, however, enters this world with the rare and powerful class of the Arcanist. How will the recently ardent seeker of magic find greater heights, or will he land in deeper depths?

Additional Tags: Game elements, Another World, Mature Themes

Cover Art: by NGT http://forum.royalroadl.com/showthread.php?tid=83944

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: New Beginnings ago
Chapter 2: I'm Sorry I Doubted you Grandfather! ago
Chapter 3: The Arcane Scholar ago
Chapter 4: A Fairy and a Broken Seal ago
Chapter 5: Fae Contractor ago
Chapter 6: Run with the Wind! ago
Chapter 7: Resistance ago
Chapter 8: The Arcane Elementalist ago
Chapter 9: Monster Hunters ago
Chapter 10: Winter's Guardians ago
Chapter 11: The Dungeon's Entrance ago
Chapter 12: The First Step ago
Chapter 13: Fallen City of Nalmar ago
Chapter 14: A Change of Scenery ago
Chapter 15: The Fog ago
Chapter 16: An Unexpected Addition ago
Chapter 17: Arcane Power ago
Chapter 18: A Vanquishing Spear ago
Chapter 19: The Horde ago
Chapter 20: Soar ago
Chapter 21: Deliverance ago
Chapter 22: Wyvern's Roost ago
Chapter 23: Domain ago
Chapter 24: Rising Caverns and Falling Flames ago
Chapter 25: Descent ago
Chapter 26: The Return ago
Chapter 27: A Temporary Home ago
Chapter 28: The Hunt ago
Chapter 29: Back to Where it All Began ago
Chapter 30: Standardization ago
Chapter 31: Final Preparations ago
Chapter 32: Advancement ago
Chapter 33: Fruit of the World Tree ago
Chapter 34: A New Wind Blows. ago
Chapter 35: The Low Road ago
Chapter 36: Toward the Tower ago
Chapter 37: A Familiar Sensation ago
Chapter 38: The Mana-Well ago
Chapter 39: Voidwalker ago
Chapter 40: Maiden Elru ago
Chapter 41: A Trade ago
Chapter 42: A Ring's Value ago
Chapter 43: Flame-Touched ago
Chapter 44: Of Mages and Arachne ago
Chapter 45: A Message ago
Chapter 46: Arcane Presence ago
Chapter 47: Druidic Magic ago
Chapter 48: The Ice Wolf Queen ago
Chapter 49: Not Even a Footnote ago
Chapter 50: Arcane Invigoration ago
Chapter 51: Devil King Agmar ago
Chapter 52: An Unexpected Destination ago
Chapter 53: A New Arrival ago
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Nighty
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A magic scholar on a journey to master his study.

Unlike in most stories where the protagonist ends up in another world he did so thanks to his own power and not a plot device summoning that just happens for no reason other than to allow the plot to take plce. Even if it was not intentional it opens up a lot of potentional directions this story can take from there that would not be possible with the cookie cutter plot devices.

 

The MC has the perfect mindset for a great story of magic study and adventure, he doesnt lack determination in pursuit of his goal and the most important : he does have a goal.

With a good balance of righteousness and ruthlessness the MC is not overly cruel or softhearted and makes the right choices to survive in a ruthless world while coming out on top in a conflict. He is neither the hero nor the demon lord but has his own designs on what to do with the world he ended up traveling to.

 

His companions are a rare mix of individuals that promise a lot of trouble due to their background , perfect for keeping the action running wherever he goes. Their personalities are authentic and diverse enough to make even casual conversations entertaining and their interaction doesn't get dull or repetitive.

 

Overall its an interesting story that hooked me since the first chapter and hasn't let me down ever since. The only reason I'm giving  4.5 stars to the story score and not 5 is because his ability to learn in his sleep is on one hand unique but on the other hand quite lazy and overpowered. His goal is the mastery of magic and all he has to do for that is sleep.

Edit after chapter 25: changed score to 5 , MC doesnt get the easy way out of training for the more difficult spells anymore and gets off his lazy behind to actually train.

moRles
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Gran novela, me encanta el mc y la historia en si , espero poder seguir leyendo, gracias por el gran trabajo.

skjq444
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This story is what a LitRPG should be in my opinion. It's got skills; it's got levels; it's got BAMF who do all kinds of crazy stuff. What more do you need in a story? 

I shared this on the facebook LitRPG group and everyone loved it.

If you're on the fence about it, just click that there chapter one link and forget the life you had before reading this story because it was not as good as it will be once you've taken the Arcane explosion right to the face. Do it and do it now. 

For some more nitty gritty stuffs. MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD

-This is a fantasy LitRPG. Not VR. 
-The MC is a tad bit OP at times but also struggles at others. One of those abilities that leave no stone unturnable kind of thing. Comparable to Aleron Kong's The Land story where the mc in that series has 100% affinity with everything and seeks to learn it all, yet not quite the same. 
-Has some romance in it. Doesn't have any of them sweet'n'juicy scences but it does mention it happens. 
-Be prepared for a bit of blood at times. There isn't a whole lot of detail into the gore but battles are frequent and beautiful. 
-There is a bit of puzzle in the story that the reader is trying to solve. Not everyone picks up on this but if you're a close reader it's quick to see and fun to guess at.
-Updates frequently. The author went through several different timeframes and goals to what he does now. That is now an 18,000 word goal a week. Absolutley monstrous compared to a good portion of stories so far and he does an amazing job of meeting that. If he misses a bit one week he makes up for it right quick the next. Updates are usually every other day Wed-Sun. Sometimes less but bigger chapters.
-The foreshadowing in the story is a little bland in my opinion. Makes it a bit too obvious but we don't expect perfection here at RoyalRoadL now do we? It is done better than quite a few I have read. 

Now onto the few things I have noticed in the story that I somewhat dislike.

-Our MC doesn't really have a kryptonite as of yet. He isn't unkillable by far but his brute strength is scary and along with the company he keeps, he is very hard to kill. His major downfall is himself. 
-The area he has visited is decently small and progress is kind of slow at times. Not always a bad thing but at least there isn't a random 3 year time jump yet. I'm looking at you Chronicle of the Eternal. (Also a good story but not on RRL)
-Author hints at quite a few different enemies that will eventually attack the MC due to various reasons at some point but so far only one of them even interacted with the party. Needs more danger/drama if they are mentioned so often.
-Definitely needs to develop the family/friends angle much more. Only one is mentioned more than once besides a few words here or there that don't give specifics. 

That is pretty much my take on the story but it's one i'm gonna keep bookmarked till it pops up in the completed section of RRL. 

emberwing
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New and definitely worth a read.

Though there aren't many chapters out yet i feel confident enough to rate this work with five stars.

The grammar and spelling are on point with only a few mistakes here and there. 

The world is in the process of being developed but it is being done splendidly and the author seems to be taking his time whilst doing it .

The characters are likeable though somewhat one-dimensional as of yet, i won't be subtracting any points for this though due to the fact that only six chapters have been released as of yet and it seems to be going in the right direction.

 

Andy8583
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Best Mage novel I have read in a looooong time

Ok, so I'm a bit of a magic and mages nut. If there were ever a VRMMO game released, I would go for a pure mage build 100% of the time and damn the consequences.

 

You manage to do magic very well in this novel I feel. And I dont have much time right now, but i promise to write a long er review later.

Gotta go, double bio right now.

earmuffs
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I usually don't bother reviewing...

I don't usually bother reviewing but I wan't more chapters so sue me.

What this story has: impeccable style, a solid story and great characters.

What this story doesn't have: more damn chapters. Keep 'em coming, mate.

By the way, who the hell decrees that having a borderline generic story is bad? This author pulled a typical theme as a story but made it his own (please keep it that way). I'm putting my odds in favor of this work.

At least the MC doesn't make your innards cringe horrifically (except that one time... T_T).

Treyon
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Its an amazing story with a hero MC but with guts to kill.

Well.. the whole thing about magic on earth and that there were only 2 mages (MC included) but in reality there was a whole guild about it and the MC even had his magic sealed and he didnt know about it. I hope that you can make use of these things that you have introduced as something quite important, for example, why did the MC has his magic sealed in the first place?. Its even implied that his supposed grandfather is older than 1000 or whatever g-g-g-g-great-grandfather means.

I quite like the interactions that the mc has with Luna so i hope that you can keep that up since there are tons of stuff you can talk with a fairy (And first waifu). So i hope that she learns how to grow bigger and smaller at will to solve issues.

About the thing with the demons i hope that the MC can solve things such as the ceremony and change it to something else, maybe its me but i believe that the MC can find the way to awaken the demons without the need of doing THAT.

Also i hope that you can provide a better background for the girls and possible explain their past and the place they lived. 

Also i hope that MC can ask more things to kara since she clearle knows more about the world than Luna.

Devest
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Great story. If it was a book I had to pay for I would gladly buy it.

hao16
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A great start, with a solid writing style

The story has an excellent pace to it. The writing style is stellar and grammar is near perfect. There are a few incongruities at this point, but I'm hoping that with enough time and more chapters they will be addressed. The story has a nice setting to it, with likeable characters. At this point it is still too early for an incredibly detailed review, considering that the author promised 5 chapters/week and that the plot is still in its infancy. 

The one complaint that I have so far is absolutely nothing is known about the origins of the protagonist. But I don't think that this is a big issue, as the author seems to be going for a gradual reveal of the protagonist's past instead of an info dump. That is also fine

As for other readers looking to get a sense of the novel from the reviews, without spoiling too much, this is a summoned to new world story with a twist. So far so good, with enough action and a good deal of humor. I'm leaving it at 4.5/5 for now, as it is too early. Will come back in the future and amend my score.

bor902
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I want to leave a serious review too, maybe help the author make this already somewhat amazing story even better.

 

Style: The writing style is in some ways awkward, but it is a style that is easy to read, some authors start writing trying to formulate huge and complex blocks of text which they simply don't have the skill to wield.

The short and succinct style makes for a smooth reading experience. A lot of improvements will be necessary before I deem it 5/5, but you are on the correct way already without many fatalistic mistakes making the rating easy to reach as long as hard work is applied.

 

Story: I honestly don't know what a story score is even supposed to be, to me it sounds like a weak synonym to the overall score. Never the less I imagine the creators of this system thought it to be a scoring for the world creation and story progression.

Okay first world creation, great job with some refinement I would imagine this world being something that I find in professional works, sadly some of the cliches are, cringy, well executed but still lowering the overall rating. Other than that mistake I believe the world you write about engaging and entertaining, with only 24 chapters to go on you might still mess up, but hey, that's life.

Story progression is in some ways too fast and in some ways to slow, these two managing to balance out a bit. The gaining of skills and the escalation of conflict done in a way that ensures you will either have to rewrite significant parts of the story or end it prematurely. One of the only great stories I have read with a similar escalation of conflict is Worm by Wildbow and some Fanfictions I would rather not mention. But the thing about Worm is that it reached your level of escalation at what I think were 500 k words.

 

Grammar: Not really much to say here, the uses of the times are horrible at some points other than that the things that bother me most are the common comma mistakes.

 

Character Score: The characters are at most times nicely fleshed out and have an apparent personality, sadly some of the personalities are cliche as well. To be quite honest I think the best fleshed out character is Leaf, yes Leaf, the level 3 scrub wannabe blackmailer.

In most stories the main character gains an enemy, the enemy then proceeds to dog our hero until the end of time until dismayed, turned via humiliating defeat, or more often death.

Leaf after realizing there was no conceivable way actually to blackmail Rainer and Kara(?), simply decides not to do it showing a thought process reminiscent of an actual human and not of a mere caricature only there to progress the plot. 

 

Overall it's an entertaining story, although lacking a proofreader, sorry for the insult if you do have a proofreader.

I think the world you created has much potential just as you, the writer, yourself.

Practice makes perfect