Vesryn Pulse

by ArchlordZero

Original Action Adventure Fantasy Cyberpunk Grimdark Magic School Life Strong Lead

Long ago, the humans triumphed over the dragons, sealing them into a human mortal body now known as dragonoids. The dragonoids became enslaved by the humans, and uses them as military weapons by the power of the Vesryn Pulse. Arcadia, a guerilla group led by Estoff Wraith, act as freedom fighters, offers the only resistance to the mankind’s cruel abuse of their power.

A set of dire events occurred, bonding two individual’s fates altogether.

Amphere Harrison entered the Dragon Knight Academy with his dragonoid partner, Airelina Frembell, who is also a key member of the Arcadia. Now an unwilling participant in the struggle against the abusive government, Amphere must learn to control his dragonoid’s power and win the Dragon Knights Tournament to gain the princess’s favor. This will be their first step to give dragonoids the freedom they deserve once and for all.

Vesryn Pulse follows the action filled story of a young man who is dragged into a brutal war, possessing the unbelievable skills to help him uncover the secrets of the government, Arcadia, and the Vesryn Pulse. However, he will soon learn that the truth comes at a far greater price that he could ever imagine.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
The Vesryn Pulse ago
Prologue ago
Chapter 1: A Dragon and a Knight ago
Chapter 2: A Fateful Encounter ago
Chapter 3: Pledge to Protect ago
Chapter 4: Dawn of the Futuretech Dragon ago
Chapter 5: From Then and Now ago
Chapter 6: A New Opportunity ago
Chapter 7: Metal Rocks! ago
Chapter 8: The Way of Freedom ago
Chapter 9: Registration ago
Chapter 10: The Silver Woman ago
Chapter 11: Mask’s Mystery ago
Chapter 12: Chevalier Unit ago
Chapter 13: Elimination Round ago
Chapter 14: A Deal with the Phantom ago
Chapter 15: Dragon Clash Royale ago
Chapter 16: Overload ago
Chapter 17: Promise for a Free World ago
Chapter 18: Exit of the Phantom ago
Chapter 19: Vanilla City ago
Chapter 20: Please Trust Me ago
Chapter 21: Blackmail ago
First Days in the Dragon Knight Academy ago
Chapter 22: Fairy Dance ago
Chapter 23: Poison Gas ago
Chapter 24: Deduction ago
Chapter 25: Phantom Revival ago
Chapter 26: Ghost of the Past ago
Story of Rudolf Azregon ago
Chapter 27: Tropical Madness! ago
Chapter 28: The Ruined Cathedral ago
The Story of Twin Stained Hearts ago
Chapter 29: Confessions ago
Chapter 30: A True Bond ago
Chapter 31: Estoff’s Wrath ago
Chapter 32: Voice of the Emperor ago
Chapter 33: Overtech Dragon ago
Chapter 34: Dracaryx Unleashed! ago
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DON'T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE IN HERE! ^.^

I don't usually make reviews becouse i suck at them and becouse i am lazy, but i felt like i had to make one for this story, and reason is there are none other than this currently.

Style: it feels good, easy to read but not to simple at the same time. 

The narration is in first person through the view of multiple pov, while the MCs (they are two I guess), still retain more importance. 

Grammar: I think it's good enought for me but i am italian so... take me half-heartedly.

Story: has promise. The academy thing is a nice set up for starting fantasy books ( personal opinion here). The mistery and politics behind the courtains are cool! 

Characters: they feel a bit out of an anime show, but i can't say they aren't well fleshed, it's good as long as you will develop them more throughfully.

 

Please bear with my grammar and poor explanations... KEEP IT UP! ;)