Spell Analyst

Terrific story thus far! Potential is the key word here. Only 19 chapters thus far and I do plan on updating this review later, but I have been pleased thus far. The author is consistently releasing three chapters a week and appears to be staying several chapters ahead of his releases, so this allows for higher quality chapters due to his ability to edit before release. World creation in the story comes accross as rather weird, but personally I find it very original. It is fairly unique and I enjoy fresh edibles when consuming books. Style is LitRPG, and because the story is still developing it is still not quite fully fleshed out, but again potential! Keep your eye on this one. The first few chapters are fairly entertaining and the later ones are developing into something quite appetizing.

This is an amazing story and has a great concept behind it. The characters are likeable but the whole justice prevails thing isn't really my cup of tea. Not saying I've stopped reading the story, of course it is impossible to have a story where every single aspect of it will satisfy every reader.

Anyway, you're an awesome writer and I hope you don't drop this story. 

This is very good story with well developed MC. I liked that he is a person with good morals as there are many stories with moraly grey or even despicable characters. I also like how creative he is.

Maybe the most interesting aspect of this story is the world where it is placed. It's a fantasy world but with hidden from most people, technical, machinery-like, computer-like basis. And the MC is using it and his knowledge of informatic systems to his advantage.

Seeing as there aren't any reviews for this yet, wanted to add one since it really is worth the read. Note that this is after Ch4 so it can still either get better or worse, but so far it seems that it's going to get better.

So far the Characters and Setting are very interesting (from what we've seen so far) There's still plenty of space for it to grow and uses the setting to explain why magic works. 

Looking forward to more chapters

My first time giving a review so I have no idea what to do or say . So I am going to keep this short. I like this story a lot and I demand more chapters! I think this is how it works . I guess that’s it.

Keep up the good work :).

The story is pretty cool, the MC uses his programming knowledge as a spell caster. The overall story was good and I was enjoying it.

Writing is good, grammar is good.

I have no real complaints about the story, I just kinda lost interest in it like most stories. Expect for fan fiction, I love that stuff.

I completly admit that this isn't an offical review and their are some grammer errors. However This is a world that I love, the MC might be overpowered but it is showing where his bounderys are. The grammer is an issue at the start but itgets better and I respect the decitation. I really want this to contine. Like what is going to happen to Joradan, Elsie, and the others. This creation resonated with me like no other seting it tieing first place with Defiance of the Fall. Author if you are reading this then I hope you have been having a wonderful time as a dad or mabey dealling with teenagers. If you have time pease try to expaned this world and its wondfuly built charactters. I saw you were on this January, I will be checking on this so love your work and hope you can come back :)

Listen, I have only read one chapter and what I read needed a lot of polish and editting.
So I'm giving my score based on how much work has been put into this title. 9 months, 92 entries. Good job.

My review for this title was made because there are people on this site who make several accounts and give their own works 5 star reviews. While bombarding other people's works with .5 star reviews.

Real writers deserve recognition and I'm going to give this one 4 stars based on how much dedication the writer has put into it.

The struggle is real. Keep at it.

Was great until the MC got his unique class, then it went downhill.

MC doesn't think about any consequences. "Hello person-I-have-just-met. Let me just give you a brand new class with 3 - 5+ years of progress. Oh, here's some legendary skill as well."

This story has an interesting concept which fails to live up to its potential due to poor execution.

The biggest problem is with how everything other than the dialogue is exposition. This is only made worse by grammatical errors caused by the author not understand many of the words he is using. 

The story should be readable if you are fine with mental corrections as you are reading and a huge amount of exposition.