Unwritten Rules

by authoradamhorne

Original Fantasy LitRPG Sci-fi Male Lead Virtual Reality

Kevin was a young man enjoying his college life when a car jumped the curb and crippled his body. Unable to support himself and dependent on others to meet his needs, Kevin was slipping into depression when his best friend convinced him to play a new game called Genesis Online. The concept was simple: a revolutionary artificial intelligence controlled the game world and adapted it to the actions of the players. Even the developers didn't know what course the game could take as it evolved.

Lured into the game by the prospect of earning real money, Kevin soon runs afoul of a man determined to control as much of Genesis as possible. He recruits other disenfranchised players to his side in his quest to find a way to prosper in the game. Can they stop the man who calls himself the king of Genesis from taking over everything?

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This story so far is pretty good, and it was a fun read.  I sincerely hope the author continues writing.  The main character has personality, a past, and isn't one of those inflatable doll op characters.  The writing grammar and punctuation didn't distract me, so it must have been decent.  The plot is very simple, the only weakness hangs on the contract system, so that is going to need to be reinforced later in the story.  All in all i had an enjoyable read.