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Apologies for the lack of chapters.

I have just now finished rewriting, well, not really rewriting, but I wrote a proper prologue for this story that is at the very front of the story.

I am posting this to apologise to all of the patrons and avid readers of this story because this break may take a lot longer than I was expecting. There is a lot I want to change to the start of the story and it's gonna take a fuckload of time to implement. So, I am going to try my very best to write at least 2 rewritten chapters a week and 1 new chapter a week.

Basically, I'm cutting my schedule in a third.

Hopefully, all of my patrons stand by me for the month to two months that this will take since I'm doing it for the sake of the novel, but I understand if you're upset in some sort of way.

There will still be 3 Shovels In Spades chapters per week and I highly recommend for everyone to read that since it is of a far better quality than LTW is at right now overall. My rewrite hopes to level them out.

I'd like to point out that this rewrite is to fix the story, the last rewrite was to fix the grammar.

One last note, I'd like to ask you guys to give me suggestions for things you would change in the story if you could? If your idea makes enough sense and is good enough, I might implement it in the story, with credit to you, of course.

Thank you for understanding, and again, sorry.

Link to the new Prologue.

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Bio: Hey there, nice to see you. I'm just an ordinary man who enjoys writing. I'd love to make a living off of it or become a teacher. Both lofty, yet reachable goals. Anyway, I hope you enjoy my novels if you read them and if not, I hope you enjoy looking at my profile.

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Deuxz @Deuxz ago

Isn't this like the 3rd or 4th time you're rewriting your story? Can't you just f*cking stop already? If you're going to rewrite it, finish it first. Literally just annoying you're fans for no reason whatsoever.

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    Lone @Lone ago

    3rd rewrite. The first was a mess, the second was for grammar, and this one is to actually fix the story. I'd rather you didn't comment at all to be honest if you're going to be so toxic about me wanting to improve my novel.

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    Lone @Lone ago

    You do realise that actual published books go through tonnes and tonnes of reiterations before publishing? I am writing for fun and am not published, so if I wish to rewrite, I will rewrite. You really don't have a say in the matter.

    Tyicius @Tyicius ago

    Don't be a toxic bitch. He's trying to improve his story if anything you should be showing support.

    Bottom line: IT'S A FREE NOVEL.

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    Lone @Lone ago

    Also, I literally said here that I will write one NEW chapter per week at least. A lot of authors don't do that much when they decide to attempt to rewrite their works. What right do you have to complain?

Treyon @Treyon ago

Sooo.... if i understood it right you want to rewrite the start of the novel again????, im confused, you already finished the rewrite a while back, i dont see the need to fix it.

Mikkel @Mikkel ago

You do you, make something you can be proud of, that's what matters. Us viewers are just seagulls at the beach that is your story, swooping in to eat people's snacks that are your chapters. Seagulls don't need those snacks. They just enjoy them.

 

Edit: it's 45 minutes later, I'm laying in bed, and I'm supposed to wake up for work in 4.5 hours, and I realize this metaphor could have been way better. The beach is the website, the snacks are each story. Or something. Fuck.

Smite @Smite ago

How much are you changing? Am I going to have to re read the story to understand what changes have been made?

i understand that you think you don’t know how to write a harem, but maybe you could write a few one off non canon chapters to test the waters?

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    Lone @Lone ago

    I will be changing a lot, but it shouldn't impact book 2 much, so re-reading isn't necessary. I'll be posting a list of all the changes anyway, so everyone is still in the know.

    Regarding a harem, maybe? It all depends on how the story pans out really.

      Crimson @Crimson ago

      I don't know about the harem bro i really really like thrm as a couple well if you want to try maybe 2 is enough( as a harem lover like myself it takes courage to say tht), as for the story i actually stop reading in rrl road in the previous month and i focus to read the stories in fanficton. Net. So yeah even if you don't rewrite it i will still go back to chapter 1.

ssddx @ssddx ago

i cant say i liked the last chapter released before the break at all. if it continues that way i'm not sure i will like it. thats about all i wanted to add outside of the review i made earlier.

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      ssddx @ssddx ago

      it just seems like the main character is a complete idiot at times. dont get me wrong.. i really do enjoy a good cocky/confident/strong-willed/foul-mouthed MC if done right but most know their limits to some degree while it seems this mc still doesnt.

      a good analogy would you being an average citizen walking up to an armed cop and slapping him in the back of the head. while it certainly is possible to have the guts to do so, the risk is far too high for any sane person.

      of course, your story and your mc so i'm not saying you need to change as you're writing for your own enjoyment [i hope]. i will say however that my interest certainly drops the more he does such antics.

rorpuissant @rorpuissant ago

Ohoh I always like the idea of polished books I read.

Do you already have ideas of the big points of the story you wish to change ?

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