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I liked this story, I'm just sad that she was put under hiatus, I was addicted.

Decently written, a fun MC but (at this point I just finished book 2) I am frustrated with how the plot seems to require the MC to pick up the idiot ball over and over to progress. 

That and it seems people are way too accepting of how bizarre she is. Its like "oh she forged a unique white steel magic hammer after just a few months training, huh."

Not your everyday average story in where the MC gets an OP power that lets them act all carefree with little to no worries. 

In here you get a MC that a clever little girl who reincarnated as a catkin who has to work hard on to getting stronger and better at crafting even with her OP abilities.  No free passes on easy mode just because of reincarnaion to a new world.  Or instant power-ups that can happen just because of her OP power that helps increase her skill level faster than average due to her not being used to those skills like someone cooking or swimming for the first time ever.

While she can make some good plans it doesn't mean she will succeed due various factors for example not knowing things consider as common sense or simply things don't go as plan.

Simply give this story a try to see why this is interesting story to read about.

I love this. I find it incredibly fun to read. But it's on Hiatus or dropped even. Such a shame... such a shame. (Still worth reading though if you haven't yet.)

This is one of the best fantasy's I've read.

the main character is a refreshing experience with her actually have visible lasting trauma and thinking things through while also having emotions

the writing style is really amazing. The author wrights subtle hints and character traits through how they refer to other people and how they think.

The story is yet to properly start yet so I can't say much about it yet. The main story so far is a nice refresh from all of the pure depression stories there are. This one often has the MC thinking of wats to improve the situation and isn't completely full of depression with good things that happen to her through her own effort

I'm not good at english so don't expect a advance review! its pretty good, i like the character and the story so far and can't wait for more.

more,more more

I like this story a lot. Starts out a bit shaky, but comes into it's own after a few chapters. It's mostly light fun, well thought out fluff. The grammar for RR is well above normal, it's actually better than some novels published by the big houses. The author seems to have actually... *GASP*... plotted the story ahead of time! There's also no overarching quest to slay the overlord, just Shiro trying to get through her week. Shiro is overpowered, but it's subtle increased learning speed instead of a hard DPS boost. Also, the story isn't about a huge cast of characters and the power of friendship. It's about Shiro and the world. Characters come and go. The world shapes Shiro as the story progresses, she isn't static. So... with that said.

Let's get this out of the way, the protagonist is 12. A bright 12 year old, but still 12. She'll do some stupid things an adult wouldn't, some of her thought processes are simplistic and that's played for light humor. The darker humor is seeing a 12 year old run smack dab into some of the uglier sides of the world a white middle class 12 year old has been protected from. She's transplanted to a medieval society. Racism is rampant, slavery exists, some of the countries still have serf systems, access to books and education is gated, religion is still a real political power in the world, guilds don't exist to enforce standards but to safeguard power, and a host of other things. The world is real because it's our world 6-800 years ago. Just it happens to have fantasy races.

It's not all doom and gloom, it's actually fairly lightly handled, Shiro isn't a deep enough thinker to get upset about the social injustices of it. She's mainly just upset when something directly effects her and the brain time is spent figuring out how to get around it for her day to day life. Again, she's 12 and more worried about survival than politics. So we aren't spending 10 chapters navel gazing about how to change it. She isn't a hero sent to "fix" the world, just a young girl trying to get by. That said, the uglier sides of the world do change her. Shiro becomes a racist, but with reason. If a few races are constantly dumping on her because of her race, her reaction is to be untrusting of them. Some people will find all that offputting, but it all makes sense and is perfectly valid in context.

To repeat the first sentence. I like this story a lot. Despite the lightness the story is handled with it is far better than anything on RR has any reason to be. It isn't a fever dream of teenage wish fullfilment, it's a slice of life with a more measured grown up take on the litrpg genre.

a good story,

thanks

the main character is a bit too naiv for my liking, and while it is gettig better, it is getting better slower than i would hope, but still, progress is progress

A short review.

If you like the bumbling idiot main character trope then you will most likely enjoy this story.

If you want your MC to be smart and have common sense then this story will frustrate you to no end.

For a novice you sure can spin a great story!

I won't go into too many details as I don't want to post any spoilers but the MC, while being OP doesn't have an easy life, things could go worse but they could also be a lot better. The early misfortune is IMHO actually an accurate portrayal of human bigotry.

I like most of the characters, the only reason I didn't give 5 stars is I felt that some of them could do with a little more fleshing out.

Same reason for story, its thoroughly enjoyable but I'm having a hard time following the plot. Not necessarily a bad thing but also not something that can be properly judged mid story. So another 4.5 stars.

Grammer is solid, very few mistakes and used correctly for the most part. Much like style, I had a hard time with this. Easily better than a 4 star but I don't like giving 5 stars to stories that don't have an editor (I understand you do your own editing, and you do a good job of it, but its not the same as having a dedicated editor).

A solid 4.5 overall score, but with a little work I can see this being an easy 5 star book.