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I created a discord so i can give people announcements, like if im going to miss a daily release or if you just want to know when a new chapter is coming out. Will also keep add edit notes as they happen

https://discord.gg/fjjcrSU

That said... i made Mia conscious in 37 for higher impact, so you guys may want to check it out (sorry if it ruins your immersion lol)

 

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King Killer @King Killer ago

Why wud u do this I just finished reading it.

I'm kidding is okay for the great story

 

belkak210 @belkak210 ago

Mia's death is now much better, to bad i had already read it and the impact wasn't there anymore; but it was definitely better.

Dantevivi @Dantevivi ago

Way to twist that dagger just a little more dude

Nolan @Nolan ago

What do you mean conscious?

Nato @Nato ago

re-read, not bad adding that in. Like how your story isn't all lollipops and sunshine for the mc, there is no character development without pain - something too many stories on RRL lack or fail to convey adequately.

And as for killing Mia off - Sometimes building up a side character just to kill them off is worth it, must say I wasn't looking forward to a typical "op mc gains harem and rampages around while levelling up like crazy" theme which is where I thought you might be taking the story.

Mezhanos @Mezhanos ago

You just had to make the death more painful for us readers huh ? Really enjoying the story and can't wait to see what happens next.

Blazingfrost @Blazingfrost ago

Nice so the calman are hiding her letting everyone think she is dead including the mc

wuamklan @wuamklan ago

really good story. but don't forget the exp from the archers he killed and the nobles in the arena

Rorschach @Rorschach ago

WOW, that was amazing, Kayla's scheme was really a great idea.

I'm a little sad for Mia but her death is totally in theme with the merciless world you are building.

I read some of the comments in the previous chapter and I want to say that people should stop crying and understand that if only the bad guys die then the story loses a lot of credibility.

Now, don't go full GoT and start a killing spree of side characters but if your story manages to make us think that nobody is always safe and that being the MC's girl/wife/best friend/little sister and whatnot is not enough to have immortality like in many other novels then that would be a great accomplishment.

Keep up the good work!

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