Beyond The Abyss

by ArcheMage

Fan Fiction Adventure Comedy Fantasy Psychological LitRPG Magic Male Lead Strategy
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Traumatising content

They speak of him in whispers, As some call him a living Legend, unbound by the realm of Mortals , while others call him an Anomaly, something that shouldn't exist , but most remember him as the Mortal who saw what lies beyond the Abyss , For he is , Han Jee-Han The Gamer

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Wyatt_Currie
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Awesome content, love the new things you are doing with the pre-existing world of The Gamer. There was so much more that could have been done in the original storyline that wasn’t, I hope you elaborate on everything that can be done with such a sick concept! Keep it up!

Sudra
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I was hopeful when I saw another fanfiction of the gamer, but I can't read through the run on sentences. Just skim through the first chapter and you'll see what I mean. 

Just out of curiosity, I pulged it into the hemmingway editor.  After taking out the status screens, It scored a fourteen.