The Digidream Chronicles

by ChipMunster

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Female Lead LitRPG Secret Identity Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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Right after quitting her job at Digidream, the company where the most innovative virtual reality universe is being made, Sarah will be forced to enter the game to save her boyfriend. Once inside, she will find herself in a world that changes and evolves constantly, according to the whims of the mysterious Game Master.

Sarah will have to keep moving and fighting to improve and gain the abilities that will let her win and get out, picking some friends along the way. Everything seems to be stacked against her as she progresses through the different realms, but she will soon discover that there are other enigmatic entities that might not be in line with the rules set by the Game Master.

Will Sarah be able to win and rescue her boyfriend, or will she fail and get trapped forever inside the virtual nightmare?

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TheResonantWordsmith
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A Great Start to a Fantastic Story

I'd be hard-pressed to say I found anything wrong with this story. Right from the beginning it lays out the basic parts of the game and adds a good amount of suspense and intrigue in the first 8 chapters (all that are out at this time).

Style: The author's style is very easy to read and understand. From what I've read so far, ChipMunster has a great understanding of how to construct a LitRPG story in a fun way that doesn't bog you down with stats that by and large don't mean anything. So far, everything counts and has significance.

Grammar: I found maybe 1 error.

Story: compelling and hard to put down. The story really hits the ground running. In chapter 1, the story starts off pretty benign but quickly escalates into a mystery that establishes the stakes pretty quickly. I've favorited this story for a reason, it's really good. 

Character: The character is very sympathetic and her motivations are simple (in a good way) and well established. 

Overall: I really enjoy this story and would highly recommend it. It's been a blast to read thus far, and I sincerely can't wait for the next chapter. 

astrumluxlucis
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I like the twist on 'getting stuck in a game'.

An unexpected twist that has turned out much better than I thought. The first bit had me a little concerned it was going to stall out, but that is absolutely not the case. 

The author has a great grasp of mechanics, and how they translate into different circumstances. They are obvious, but not heavy-handed. 

I'm looking forward to more chapters.