Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Sci-fi Cyberpunk LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts School Life Secret Identity Supernatural Virtual Reality Wuxia
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Earth, 2280. Population, 70 billion.

Damien is sent on a mission to the renowned District Victoria. He must study under a famous professor in the real world, and train within the A.R. game. Only then will he find the truth behind his mysterious physique. . .

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blaster_darker00
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MUST READ! GREAT NOVEL! KEEP IT UP~!

Yeah. . . The only problems are the info dumps and chracter interactions. I like the novel. But it would be really helpful and not confusing if the info and how the characters interact with each other is more natural. But, hey, still a good job. Keep it up~! <I won't reply by the way. Me is too lazy.> @munxy \(~_~)/

A Talking Rock
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I mean my review basically says it all, but to go into more detail it just feels like the whole story is a badly written info dump. and the human interactions are kinda sh*tty too. I think the author just needs to 1. fix character interactions and 2. show not tell, or just make the info dumps more natural.

Sunsetdreamer52
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This is looking really cool! The one thing that could use some work is the info dumps in the first few chapters. After that, though, it is totally worth the read.