In the Naruto world

by lodoly

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Drama Romance Sci-fi Harem Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Reader interactive School Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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Chris Walker was teleported to the world of Naruto. He didn't die, rather someone or something teleported him there for no apparent reason.

The world of Naruto doesn't follow the same script as the original Naruto series. The whole world of Naruto is so much different, even though Chris has watched the entire naruto series, it won't help him at all since everything in Naruto is different.

And now Chris has to survive in this new world of Naruto

 

I do not have any rights to the Naruto or the cover either, this is only a hobby to write fan-fiction light novels.

 

WARNING: If you hate harem, then this novel isn't for you. There will never be any sexual content in this novel.

 

And i'll try my best to not let the harem ruin this novel. There are potentially only 5 harem members on it, NO MORE THAN THAT AMOUNT.

 

And yes, I am sorry for not keeping my word for this novel, and included a harem in it. I didn't want it either, because it means more work for me. But I did a poll and harem won.

I am sorry for that, and please forgive me.

 

Sincerely, Lodoly.

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TheDarkMist
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Its good and ill recommend it

Ok first off I would like to say that it's good and I recommend it but

The story is not the best but it is fun to read

The characters can fill one dimension sometimes *Sometimes* not all time (I think one dimension is the word I'm looking for)

The Grammar is ok and style is good

now I will just say that I will be dropping this not because its bad but because of the HAREM that is coming now as of Chapter 15 the only reason I started to read this is because there was no HAREM tag but the author did a poll and the HAREM win which is sad because I don't like HAREM but hey what can I do :{

Eserngo
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Sorry but this is cringe for me. couldn't get past ch 2, the OPness if whatever but your portrayal of anbu and the hokage is just horrible. maybe i have higher expectations since i've read legit good naruto fanfics on ff.net 

Sad to say this is really not worth your time if your looking for naruto fanfic

on the other end you could easily improve this with some grammer checking, completing words and not using u instead of you. basicly alot alot alot of polish.

Aileron
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New Writer wish fullfillment

Wish fulfillment story from someone who's probably never written anything, and doesn't even try to write well. 

Grammar is better than other stories on this site, but still quite bad. 

Probably not worth your time. 

erowarrior
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Truly something else.

This novel shows us that even authors cant keep their words in their own novel.

 

The horrible combination of naruto + harem is not something you see that often.

I tried this to improve my mind and reach enlightenment but this is beyound me.

Saphyron
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Not much to say, Insanely overpower MC right at the getgo, nonchalant attitude against anything.
The first chapter state quite clearly there would be no harem included at all, but this was later changed and there is harem in it.
Reading about a rock in a desert is more enjoyable than this pile of garbage.

Review rewrote after getting deleted for breaking policy rules on this site.
Reason: You are not allowed to say anything about the author in the review.

E5G8V8
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it is a good story and i don't like harem too but a trios could be fun with some fights 

Amaranthe
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One of the best Naruto fan fictions

İ don't normally write reviews here however that 1 star review for this novel pisssed me off. İt's a very nice fan fiction novel one the best I ever read MC is kind of op but seen far more op MC s in Naruto fan fictions. The story is nicely done and author listens to his readers and adjusts his story slightly to make readers hapoy what more do you guys want from a story?

woodssaayy
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Nothing but love for this novel! Story’s progressing smoothly, it’s readable (unlike some novels on this platform), it’s got character depth and most importantly—— its a naruto fanfiction!