The Bleak Walker

by edbarsev

Original ONGOING Horror Psychological Romance Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Strategy
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   The Bleak Walker Nolan fought through the light's war. He marched on with his fellow rank-and-file soldiers and held the line for the Heroes against the army of the Overlord of Demons so that they can save the world from the darkness. As he dies again he found himself back in time before his meeting with the Burned Woman.

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As of chapter 6.

This story has potential that should be clear to anyone who has read it, naturally though it is not without some problems.

The style is decent enough to deliver the story but some parts felt a bit disjointed to me. Though this might be because the story is still very new and to my eyes it is still unpolished.

I gave the story a 4/5 since it is neither bad nor that amazing, at least yet. I struggled between giving it a 3,5 or 4 but decided to go with 4 due to the potential I feel from it. I do hope that this story will focus on the bleak walker aspect staying true to the title as for me it has been the most interesting point so far.

I gave the grammar a 3 because it honestly has a fair share of mistakes and not limited to advanced grammar but even some names were wrongly written. Running the chapters through grammarly and fixing them up would most likely elevate this to 3.5 if not 4. An easy enough problem to fix for sure.

As previously mentioned this story is still very new and has only just begun so I won't go too far into the details regarding characters, since you might as well go read the whole story. However I will say that the MC's background is fairly interesting and I feel like he carries himself with a certain amount of intelligence unlike a lot of other MCs do. The MC has experienced a lot and is not queasy about getting himself dirty while doing what he needs to do.

All in all I wouldn't be surprised to see The Bleak Walker in trending fairly soon. If the story pans out as it has so far it will be a worthwhile read for certain.