Kindred

the story is absurdly cute considering the origin stories of both the characters. the grammar and writing style are excellent and my only real complaint is that the cultivation and world building aspects are rather neglected at the time of this review. the story is still a good palate cleanser and is a great contrast to stories that take themselves way too seriously

An Op-Mc is always something enjoyable, coupled to the fact that the Grammar and Style are barely criticizable.
Beside the few Updates, I would always like to see more (I understand though that takes a lot of time to write a good story.. A man can still dream, right?), I could only critize that the story isn't advanzed enough for a better review.

Expactatly waiting

~Jonas

I normaly realy like cute stuff but in this case it is just to mutch. With all due respect for the author i feel like the story has been puched to the background and only the cute pinkness remains. one way or the other i am sorry to say that i will leave behind this story at chapter 82.

For others who like this or somthing like this but without a lot of the cuteness i recomend: The Demonic King Chases His Wife - The Rebellious Good-for-Nothing Miss

Baka-Updates Manga link:
https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=124244

Translation website link:
http://moonbunnycafe.com/the-demonic-king-chases-his-wife-the-rebellious-good-for-nothing-miss/

i like the plot for this stroy its quite different from most others lol how often is the MC not the reincarnated individual anyway so long as this keeps updating ima keep reading it (if only the chapters were a tad bit longer though :(.... )

i find the book interesting and frustrating

interesting because the story is not told from the POV of the OP and reincarnated character but at the same time it is frustrating since most people expect that role

It is also frustrating that the chapter are so short and update are relatively slow for the short chapters

Latifa is so cute! Nuff said.

Side note: I would recommend updating the summary to reflect who the true main character is. Her background does not lose out one bit to the reincarnated Miss and hence, would make for an equally good synopsis.

What else is there to talk about? It has the standard vague charm like all of the others, the characters are all likable, the story progresses one or two lines at a time, and the grammar needs tweaking.

In other words, it's built like any other Chinese light novel out there.

Do I hate it? No. Would I recommend it to others? Only if you're into short, sweet chapters that won't explain everything to you. As well as to those of whom have read Asian light novels.

Short, and too much sweetness for no fill

It's a nice and sweet story, but there is no background construction of the world. the description of the world is left mostly to the reader imagination. While I like cute sweet and funny story, here I have an overdose, since the characters all appear to me as marshmallow.  Without living spoiler all I can say is you should give more depth to your characters and more depth to the story, because it could be great. 

Your writing is good an simple, the chapters lenght is short but that mainly because there nothing much except dialogue. 

Try writing as a third person.

It's not bad but it could be so much more. 

Keep up and improve.