Before the Day Is Done

by CelWrites

Original Drama Fantasy Romance Supernatural
The Seven were Mari's entire world. They kept her hidden away, with only themselves for company, but one day they all left. When they came back, everything changed. Mari was thrust into a world of cities, castles, kingdoms, and kings, and none of it made any sense to her. Mari, like always, was subject to the Seven's wills and whims, but ever since they taken the city, they were leaving her by herself more and more, dealing with problems they kept her in the dark about. Mari now had more questions than ever before and no one to answer them.
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Character Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Total Views :
  • 10,882
  • Average Views :
  • 419
  • Followers :
  • 36
  • Favorites :
  • 4
  • Ratings :
  • 9
  • Pages :
  • 148
Advertisement
Go to Table of Contents
Rate it
Report
Advertisement
Author
CelWrites

CelWrites

Achievements
This user has no achievements to display
Advertisement
Reviews

Leave a review

Kialandi
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

this literally keeps getting better. i am blown away by the quality of this fiction. on a further note, either the author is literally amazing, or the topic that he has chosen to write about has been specifically tailored to me. i say this because the latest chapter (#9) has absolutely no action in it. and yet, the entire time, my heart was literally pounding. i'm waiting in suspense for the next chapter, and, if done correctly, will make me stand up, in my house, and cheer. favorited.

 

read ONE chapter, and then make a decision. that's all it takes. this fic is incredible.

IrateRapScallion
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

The story is just starting to really develop, but I'm already hooked.  The author does a great job of bringing the reader into the MC's head, and makes her and her circumstances different and interesting.  A+ so far, and you can tell it's about to get so much better.