Ages Online

Im not entirely sure on how to write a detailed review so I settled on writing an overall review.

I enjoyed the story immensely, especially the detailed explanations. Extremely high quality material

having said that, continue the great work author-San!

Great story, fast updates, thank you, keep it coming!

amazing story and the mc is very interesting.

 only have 3 nation? with litle area? want to spread to the world? are you trying to tell that human just spawn in the game or something like that?

well i will review the score as i go on reading but its not my cup of tea as of now

Quick updates, along with excellent writing and great characterization make this a must read. 

First, the writing. The plot moves at a perfect pace. The world has a decent amount of detail so you can actually imagine it in your head. And to top it off, the grammar and spelling are actually pretty damn good. That is more than I can say about most of the stories on this site.

Secondly, the characters are pretty solid. I absolutely hate OP character stories. They are boring after a chapter or two because there is really nothing you can do to challenge the characters. That is not true in this story. The character actually seems kind of weak, at least for now. Yet, he overcomes the challenges in front of him with his wits and meager powers along with his (now) companion. The characters also actually have some depth to them. 

Finally, this doesn't read like a middle school power fantasy. There is no huge powerups. There are not 50 women following him around for pretty much no reason. And he doesn't log into the game and instantly get some overpowered class that no game company would ever put into their game. Hell, even Weed's class in Legendary Moonlight Sculptor was broken overpowered and has no business being in a for profit game. On the other hand, the class the MC gets in this story/game actually fits with the world.

Anyone who likes this genre is doing themselves a disservice by not reading this. 

It unique in how it using a different class then other stories by either OP on a DPS or Support cast and instead it something that most of us would not even think could be a class… Historian. Otherwise the story seems to follow a bit of the same plot in hiding his class while dealing with its difficult restrictions that if follows through will become a OP latter. Luckily the author of this story keeps you interested in it despite the same overall plot. For me personally, I did not find any grammar errors, but then again I good about auto fixing grammar as I read so might not notice it as much as others.  Anyway I enjoyed the story and continue to look forward to others chapters so keep up the good work Karides!

Thank you for writing this great fanfic       

It was really good when the plot advanced then you stop releasing chapters? Why?

Awesome story =D

Only suggestion is to include details regarding the other races / kingdoms of the world at the moment it appears as though the humans are the only civilization or significance

Thanks for sharing cant wait to see what happens =D

Ages online is a decent fanfic though its lacking in a few areas. first of all how come the mc isnt a girl? thats really weird. he isnt cute either. there isnt even a training arc in the fanfic!!! like training is the best part ever its so fun reading about the training centre lol. he doesnt even have a pet and seems dense when it comes to character interactions. for example the pker who forced beast into the dark dungeon, anyone with a brain would know what would come next but for some reason they fought? its clear the pker had a lot of pent up stress so thats not what someone would do in that situation.