I've Been Summoned as a Hero ...I'm a God Though

by Oinos

Original Adventure Comedy Drama Fantasy Female Lead Gender Bender LitRPG Magic Non-Human lead Secret Identity Strong Lead Summoned Hero
Warning This fiction contains:
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Tyche, Lakshmi, Budai, Caishen, Fortuna, Laima, Ekeko, Rundas, they are just some of the names humans have given me on Earth. I bring fortune and luck. I govern chance and possibility. I am the personification of the phenomena that rule over matter on a quantum level.

...and right now I'm on a vacation to enjoy human food around the world, or I was, as someone decided to summon me to another world and stick the "hero" title to me. This new world seems a lot like the games that appeared on Earth in the last decades, so I'm just going to enjoy it for a while.

 

 

 

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R18 This novel contains gore, explicit sexual content and profanity.

This novel is a work of fiction that may depict gods in a way that differs a lot from today religions, please don't be offended by this and please don't start a new religion out of it, we have already enough to choose from (someone may laugh reading this disclaimer but you can never know).

 

 

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At least a chapter a week between Friday and Sunday.

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Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - A train ticket that will not be reimbursed. (+ illustrations) ago
Chapter 2 – First meeting with the king. ago
Chapter 3 – The Pizza Palace and the Two Gods. ago
Chapter 4 – Showing Your Status Is Enough to Make a King Smile Apparently ago
Extra – Status Explanation ago
Chapter 5 - The Queen ago
Chapter 6 – Party at King’s ago
Extra - Bath Talks ago
Extra - Map ago
Chapter 7 – First Day of Training [Part 1] ago
Chapter 8 – First Day of Training [Part 2] ago
Chapter 9 – 43rd Day of Training [Part 1] ago
Chapter 10 – 43rd Day of Training [Part 2] ago
Chapter 11 – Unexpected Day Off ago
Chapter 12 – The Baroness ago
Chapter 13 – The Kings of Old (+illustrations) ago
Chapter 14 – The Morning before the Match ago
Chapter 15 – The Match ago
Extra - Pictostory 10/02 "Search" (non canon) ago
Chapter 16 – Good Morning Princess ago
UPDATE: Please help me! ago
Chapter 17 – Investiture ago
Chapter 18 – The Generals (+ illustrations) ago
Chapter 19 – War Council ago
Chapter 20 – “Can I?” “Ask your father”. ago
Extra – The Night Before Goodbye ago
Chapter 21 – Adventurer ago
Chapter 22 - A Flower in a Clearing ago
Chapter 23 - Two Hares and a Barrel ago
Chapter 24 - Next Time Use Sand, Please ago
Chapter 25 - Let's Hope They Don't Know How to Climb ago
Chapter 26 - In Need of a Toothpick ago
Chapter 27 - Is This Gap Moe? ago
Extra - Is It a Phone Call if Phones Don't Exist? ago
Extra - Scent of a (Elven) Woman ago
Chapter 28 – Elf in the Barrel ago
Chapter 29 – Questity Quests ago
Chapter 30 – Brother and Sister ago
Chapter 31 – Bishop Is Two Letters Away from Bishojo ago
Chapter 32 - Mountainside Camping ago
Chapter 33 - The Wedding Dragon ago
Chapter 34 - A Father's Problems ago
Extra - The Black Rose ago
Chapter 35 - A Fiery Ring ago
Thank You ago
Chapter 36 - Severe Lack of Nurse Outfits ago
Chapter 37 - An Offer He Can't Refuse ago
Chapter 38 - Mamaaa... I Killed a Man ago
Chapter 39 - Pulling a Lady Anise ago
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Sintress
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I won't sugar coat it, this needs a bit of work. But you have been making improvements with the latest chapters so don't feel so bad. It is not the worst thing I have seen and not the best either. Which just means you have lots of room to improve and spread your writer wings. You picked a rather crowded genre and unless you do something truely special, it will get drowned in all the other reincarnation stories. As someone who has read a lot of them, I am a bit desensatized to them. So unless a story really jumps at me, well, you read one, you read them all.

Alright, to the nitty gritty. Your sex scenes were well, bland. Don't feel too bad this is coming from a pervert who writes erotica when  I am bored. Now, there is a time and a place for sex, but when you over saturate your story with it, not only does it get annoying, but it feels cheap and it bogs down the plot developement.

This is doubly so when you don't get the feelings involved and it just feels empty and they are just going through the motions. Sex needs to be hot, passionate and lust fueled or tender and loving. That being said, emotions are key. This is first person, so show some feelings. Seriously, if your MC was tryin to sex me, I would likely fall alseep. There needs to be more than just kissing everywhere. Like literally, enough with the kissing, there was just about a whole chapter of just kissing.

Diversify your vocabulary, that being said don't use big words that people have to look  up. Just using synonyms works rather well for breaking up the monotony of over used words.

Another thing that you could use a bit of improvement on would be descriptions. You scantly give us details about anything, her surroundings, the people, or even her herself. As for her you did a bit in the first chapter, but after a while, since the image wasn't very strong, I have already forgotten what she looks like really.

Characters were a bit shallow, especially the MC. I found it actually rather hard to like the MC with how she was presented. Emotions were lacking from well just about everything. The scene where the Queen's arm got ripped off was strange to say the least. I mean her arm got torn off. There should be screaming and crying and thrashing about. And the scene about lost loves felt very forced, especially when it came outa nowhere. I meanm I get that they are girls and girls cry, but crying like that just didn't feel right. If you had built up into it, it would have been fine.

Story plot itself is well, what you would expect from a summoned hero story.  OMG Demons!  There is almost no tension in the story what so ever, however given the premise that MC is literally a god, well it is a bit hard to find things that challenge a god, especially when said god appears to be stronger than the gods of the world that summoned her. I did like that she didn't just steam roll over her instructers in some op sheninanigans like many others do.

 Also, won't get on your case about the grammar, there was a bit of problems, but it wasn't too bad. I recomend using Grammerly and Ginger both are free and will greatly help you improve catching the small things like the word "Through" Not "Trough" I saw that quite a few time.

Long story short. Lots of room to improve, stretch that imagination muscle and show us what you can do. Make a wonderous and imaginative world. It is a fanatasy after all so let it loose :3

sincely your freindly neighborhood stripper cat.

Parpaing
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Could've been much better

The main character isn't well written, well, her interactions with others that is. Whenever someone mentions, or she thinks of her love, which died god knows how many thousand years ago, she tears up, in a way that could use more fleshing out. There's poorly written yuri, which I wouldn't mind as much if it was better introduced, not popping out of nowhere and also more fleshed out, or not feel like it was written by a pent up teenager. Another thing that ruffles my jimmies is the council being amazed at some realisation obvious to anyone who has the smallest amount of gumption. Well that just adds up to the feeling that the MC is the only real """"character"""" and that the rest are just toddlers here to react to the protagonist.

So why do I care so much that I just spent 5 minutes writing this stupid, badly written review ? Because I really like the premise and the start of the story isn't even that bad. It squandered its potential.

BTW, what I mean by poorly written is : not descriptive enough, too focused on one aspect and not on the rest of the scene, not enough vocabulary or not fleshed out enough.

Gaelas
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There is a lot of potential in this story, and the only reason I haven't given higher ratings is because we're not far enough into the narrative to tell, although it feels like "something" is just missing (perhaps a sense of tension or uncertainty, which obviously don't really work in the setting you've provided.).

I'll update once the story progresses further.

Volos
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Needs Work, But Promising

An interesting beginning to the reincarnation theme, but runs the risk of losing the twist as time goes on.  I think it will be important that the divinity of the MC remain a distinguishable aspect vs the generic OP protagonist found elsewhere.  

The development of the MC is moving along nicely, but there is room for more developed side characters.  I think it would be most interesting to see foils developed from the MC point of view, and not a switch in narrative position.  

The grammar is above average for the site, but could be improved in a few areas.  It is not to the point of being distracting from the story.

For the time being, I’m cautiously optimistic, and will continue to follow.

Uriel
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I'm getting real sick and tired of the whole 'all female characters on this site will most definitely be lesbian because the male author has either never found love or is a horny guy ruining a quality story to carry out his fantasies' I got nothing against lesbians but it's liking hearing a song everwhere on the radio, you get sick of it.

This would be an awesome story if oly the general plot line wasn't so basic, a God MC? Awesome! Summoned Hero? Cool! Lesbian? Generic. 

I'm just saying, I'm holding out for something better. 

Dodeca
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By the synopsis, I was rather unintrigued. So much so I haven't even considered to read it. However when I did,  I found that as of current chapters(up to 8) the story has been wonderful, and ended up in one of my top 5 on this website. I've read plenty of novels here mind you. This is just plain and simple good. I've never really left a review for anything else, but I needed to on this. I recommend this to anyone who enjoys these kinds of stories.

Kiriaru
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I still see grammar problems every few chapters but those are the only problems I see. A fantastic story that has a perfect mix of comedy, sexiness, fighting, powers, and love. I have read up to chapter 14 and have always been surprised by what happens in some of the later chapters. Wonderful work and I really am lucky to find it.

Adsterhappy
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The story's a bit better than most other 'summoned into another world' stories, and the author's sincere about writing the story. The plot progression is fine and I quite liked it. 

The characters themselves have a good sense of interaction, some readers may have problems understanding the flow, but there shouldn't be any problems to most.

RandomAuthor
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The Story is a very well new thing (and nice Idea by the way) where a God of another world instead of the hero is summoned.The Characters are very well made especially the protagonist. I have seen a lot of novels but never with a protagonist that is as amazing as that. I r8 a perfect score 5/7 would go insane again. 

letmeusefilter
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Very generic story, grammar could use some work.