Looking for Critical Feedback (Happy to Return the Favour!)


I'm relatively new here, and I've just started uploading chapters for my novel. I'm looking for some critical feedback to help me improve my writing in general and the novel as a whole.

If you do check it out, just note it is a light novel so the writing style may be a bit unusual to your typical western novel. As well it does content profanity, gore, sexual content and traumatising content so you have been warned. Below is a link to my novel.


Upon leaving your review if you wish for me to check one of your stories out leave a comment in your review on what you want me to read and which chapter, just to make it easier.

Thank you, and I wish you all the best!
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