Looking for Critical Feedback (Happy to Return the Favour!)

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Hello!

I'm relatively new here, and I've just started uploading chapters for my novel. I'm looking for some critical feedback to help me improve my writing in general and the novel as a whole.

If you do check it out, just note it is a light novel so the writing style may be a bit unusual to your typical western novel. As well it does content profanity, gore, sexual content and traumatising content so you have been warned. Below is a link to my novel.

http://royalroadl.com/fiction/17678/essence

Upon leaving your review if you wish for me to check one of your stories out leave a comment in your review on what you want me to read and which chapter, just to make it easier.

Thank you, and I wish you all the best!
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